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3．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mark来信说对我国的三亚很感兴趣．请你给他回封邮件，简单介绍以下内容：
1．三亚地处中国海南省南部，因美丽的海滨景色和四季如夏的气候而闻名；
2．三亚已发展成为最受欢迎的国际旅游城市之一，十分宜居；
3．其中著名的景点天涯海角和大东海等吸引了众多海内外游客．
旅游城市 a tourist city  天涯海角  the end of the seas and skies  大东海 Big east sea
要求：词数120左右．
Dear Mark，
I am very glad to hear from you．Now I will introduce Sanyato you，which you are interested in．
Sanya is one of the most famous tourist cities in southern Hainan Province of China and it is well-known for its beautiful seaside scenery and warm weather all the year around．In recent years，it has developed into a popular tourist city．The beautiful scenery and warm climate throughout the year make the city a good place to visit．The attractions include Tianyahaijiao （The end of the seas and skies） and Dadonghai （Big east sea）．
With all it provides，it attracts a lot of tourists from home and abroad every year．If you want to spend a beach vacation for fun，you will never get disappointed at Sanya．
Yours，
LiHua．

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分析 这是介绍三亚的一篇作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一点明书信目的；二介绍三亚的位置，气候和旅游特色；三欢迎来三亚旅游．高分句型：1．Now I will introduce Sanya to you，which you are interested in．句子里introduce Sanya to you表示"向你介绍三亚"； which引导非限制性定语从句，代指先行词Sanya．现在我给你介绍你所感兴趣的三亚市．2．With all it provides，it attracts a lot of tourists from home and abroad every year．句子里 it provides是省略了关系词that的定语从句，修饰先行词all；tourists from home and abroad 表示"来着国内外的游客"．因为它所能提供的这一切，三亚每年都吸引来着国内外的许多游客．

解答 Dear Mark，
    I am very glad to hear from you．Now I will introduce Sanya to you，which you are interested in．【高分句型一】（点明书信目的）
   Sanya is one of the most famous tourist cities in southern Hainan Province of China and it is well-known for its beautiful seaside scenery and warm weather all the year around．In recent years，it has developed into a popular tourist city．The beautiful scenery and warm climate throughout the year make the city a good place to visit．The attractions include Tianyahaijiao （The end of the seas and skies） and Dadonghai （Big east sea）．（介绍三亚的位置，气候和旅游特色）
   With all it provides，it attracts a lot of tourists from home and abroad every year．【高分句型二】If you want to spend a beach vacation for fun，you will never get disappointed at Sanya．（欢迎来三亚旅游）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            LiHua

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