题目内容
【题目】某中学生英文报就“保护中国传统文化”为主题举行英语征文活动。你阅读了上述文章后准备给该报投稿,稿件内容包括:
(1)保护中国传统文化的重要性;
(2)谈谈你对文化保护的建议。
On Keeping Traditional Chinese Culture
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【答案】Protect Traditional Chinese Culture
The protection of national and folk culture is of great significance to Chinese cultural diversity and also to the harmonious development between local economic and social development. It is reported that the Guangdong government pays special attention to protecting Chaoju(潮剧), a local drama born in Chaozhou in the eastern Guangdong province.
In my opinion, some measures should be taken to protect traditional culture effectively. To start with, we should make a law to regulate the society’s performance. Besides, we should draw more people’s attention to it, for the more they know about the importance of culture protection, the stronger support we can get from the public.
In a word, it is high time for us to treasure and develop our own valuable culture.
【解析】这是一篇命题作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时,要注意以下几点:1.通篇以一般现在时为主。2.要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。重点是要从提示句的关键词出发,围绕关键词开拓思路,发挥联想,注意记录下联想到的东西,可以是句子或单词词组。在写这部分时,可以使用适当的连接词,使上下文行文流畅。3.注意语气。既然主题是保护中国传统文化,语气应该比较恳切,有说服力。这一点最好有具体的例子做支撑,否则内容不够丰满。
写这篇作文时,学生可以采取简单句和复合句结合的方法,使句型变幻多样。同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语,尤其注意不要出现中国式英语,并在力所能及的范围之内使用复合句或者谚语,增加获得高分的可能性。
【范文亮点】
1.The protection of national and folk culture is of great significance to Chinese cultural diversity and also to the harmonious development between local economic and social development.保护国家和民族文化对中国文化多样性、对促进当地经济和社会协调发展有重大作用。(运用了be of great significance to, diversity, harmonious这样的高分词组词汇;运用and并列连接两个to do不定式)
2.Besides, we should draw more people’s attention to it, for the more they know about the importance of culture protection, the stronger support we can get from the public.除此之外,我们应该让更多的人注意到这个问题,因为他们对文化保护的重要性知道的越多,我们就能得到更强有力的群众支持。(运用了besides连接词,使句与句之间连接更紧密;运用了以for引导的原因状语从句;运用了“the+比较级,the+比较级”“越……越……”加分句式)
3.In a word, it is high time for us to treasure and develop our own valuable culture.总之,现在是我们要珍惜并发展我们宝贵文化的时间了。(采用了in a word这样的总结语句;采用了it is high time…这样的高分句式)