题目内容
【题目】请用英语简单地介绍一下网络好的一面和不好的一面。要点如下：
1. 可以帮助我们更好地了解外面的世界，开阔我们的视野；
2. 课后可以和老师在线交流，及时解决课堂上不明白的问题；
3. 网络上有很多不良信息，比如暴力、色情等，给学生造成不好的影响；
4. 很多学生沉迷于网络，影响了学习；
5. 长时间上网影响视力和健康。
注意：
1. 短文必须包括所有的内容要点，但不得逐句翻译；
2. 词数：120左右。
参考词汇：开阔视野broaden one’s horizons 暴力violence 色情porn 沉迷 get addicted to
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【答案】The Internet can help us know the world better. We can broaden our horizons through the Internet. Chatting on line with the teachers after class can help us solve the problems that we have not really understood in class. However, on the other hand, there is too much information that might do harm to us on the Internet, like violence, porn and so on. Many students get addicted to the Internet. They spend too much time on it so that they are unable to concentrate on their studies. What’s more, spending too much time on the Internet can make us short-sighted and do harm to our health too.
We need the Internet, but we should make good use of it and get rid of the information that we don’t need.
【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先审题，请用英语简单地介绍一下网络好的一面和不好的一面。要点如下：1. 可以帮助我们更好地了解外面的世界，开阔我们的视野；2. 课后可以和老师在线交流，及时解决课堂上不明白的问题；3. 网络上有很多不良信息，比如暴力、色情等，给学生造成不好的影响；4. 很多学生沉迷于网络，影响了学习；5. 长时间上网影响视力和健康。其次要确定时态，用一般现在时。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如Chatting on line with the teachers after class can help us solve the problems that we have not really understood in class.这里含有一个定语从句，使用了动名词作主语。However, on the other hand, there is too much information that might do harm to us on the Internet, like violence, porn and so on.这里含有一个定语从句，并运用了on the other hand等连词。
