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16．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国笔友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试（美国高考），心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得到你的帮助．请你给他回信，内容包括：
1．安慰对方；
2．分析心理压力过大会导致的后果；
3．给出相应的建议及其理由．
注意：词数不少于150．
Dear Chris，
I'm sorry to learn that you've been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test．（高分句型一）Anyone in your situation would suffer a certain amount of stress．But don't worry too much，or you may find yourself having problems with sleep，appetite，or even memory．Here are some ways I think that can deal with stress．
The first thing you can try is to exercise．Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build confidence．（高分句型二）Another way is to enjoy some games with friends，which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed．It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener； having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better．（高分句型三）
I believe it will all work out．Cheer up!Let me know if I can help further．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国笔友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试（美国高考），心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得到你的帮助．请你给他回信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：安慰对方；分析心理压力过大会导致的后果；给出相应的建议及其理由．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be under  pressure 处于压力之中；due to由于；deal with 应对，处理；not only，but also不仅，而且；Cheer up振作起来；
 I'm sorry to learn that you've been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test．（高分句型一）
Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build confidence．（高分句型二）
It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener； having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Chris，
       I'm sorry to learn that you've been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test．（高分句型一）Anyone in your situation would suffer a certain amount of stress．But don't worry too much，or you may find yourself having problems with sleep，appetite，or even memory．Here are some ways I think that can deal with stress．
      The first thing you can try is to exercise．Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build confidence．（高分句型二）Another way is to enjoy some games with friends，which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed．It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener； having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better．（高分句型三）
       I believe it will all work out．Cheer up!Let me know if I can help further．
                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                            Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．