Question

8．假如你是某中学《英语报》的学生记者李华，请你按照如下六幅图的先后顺序，以"An Honest Finder"为题，将上周周末你校高三学生王芳拾金不昧的感人事迹写成一篇英文报道，刊登在该报上．其内容要求如下：
1．报道故事的全部经过（如图所示）
2．对其事迹加以赞扬评论，并号召向她学习

注意：1．字数100字左右
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3．开头语为你写好．参考单词：telephone booth电话亭
An Honest Finder
Recently a moving deed that was done by Wang Fang，a student in Senior Grade 3，has spread all over our school．        ．

Answer 1

分析 本文是图画类作文，作文主题明确，即"An Honest Finder"，要求根据六幅图的先后顺序描述上周周末你校高三学生王芳拾金不昧的感人事迹并加以赞扬评论．
在写作时，人称以第一和第三人称为主．时态以一般过去时为主．根据情景的发展，抓住细节按顺序安排好材料．
写作要点：1．报道故事的全部经过；2．对其事迹加以赞扬评论，并号召向她学习．
重要短语：do a moving deed （做了一个感人的事），lie on the ground （躺在地上），bend down （弯腰），picked up（捡起），call sb （打电话给某人），hurry to sb（匆忙走到某人身边），gave sth to sb（把某事给某人），be grateful（感激的），take out（拿出）； in reward （作为回报）；learn from sb（向某人学习）．
【高分句型一】
1．Recently a moving deed that was done by Wang Fang，a student in Senior Grade 3，has spread all over our school．
  此处是由关系代词"that"引导的定语从句，先行词为"a moving deed"，主句为"Recently a moving deed has spread all over our school"，"a student in Senior Grade 3"为"Wang Fang"的同位语．
【高分句型二】
2．Last weekend，①Wang Fang was walking towards the bus stop to go home when she②found a purse lying on the ground．
①此处是句型"Sb was doing when sth did"意为"某人正在做某事就在此时又发生了…"．
②此处为"find+宾语+宾语补足语"结构，具体为"find+sth+现在分词"
【高分句型三】
3．①When Wang Fang gave the wallet to the lady，②she was so grateful that she took out 100 yuan in reward．
①此处是由连词"when"引导的时间状语从句，主句为"she was so grateful that she took out 100 yuan in reward"．
②此处为"so+形容词+that+句子"意为"如此以致于"引导结果状语从句．

解答 An Honest Finder
 Recently a moving deed that was done by Wang Fang，a student in Senior Grade 3，has spread all over our school．【高分句型一】Last weekend，Wang Fang was walking towards the bus stop to go home when she found a purse lying on the ground．【高分句型二】She bent down and picked it up．As she opened it，she discovered there was much money，and a name card with the owner's telephone number．So she went to a telephone booth nearby and called the owner．Then she waited on the chair by the bus stop patiently until a lady hurried to her．When Wang Fang gave the wallet to the lady，she was so grateful that she took out 100 yuan in reward．【高分句型三】
However，she refused it and waved goodbye to her．
What a kind girl!I think we all should learn from her．

点评 看图作文要求将画面所包含的有效信息用文字表达出来，并适当拓展并发挥想象．如果是记叙文类的素材，要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素；如果是说明文或议论文，首先要对图画的内容进行描述，然后围绕图画的信息进行说明或议论．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．