题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华, 你的美国朋友Jim来信说对共享单车很感兴趣。 请你给他写封回信,内容包括:
1. 单车的使用方法(如:app.查看车辆,扫码开锁等);
2. 共享单车的优势(至少两点);
3. 单车的使用现状。
参考词汇:共享单车shared bicycle;扫二维码 scan the QR code;手机应用mobile app.
注意:
1. 词数:100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m writing to tell you about bike-sharing mentioned in your last letter. It’s very easy to do it if you have a smartphone. Find a shared bicycle around you using the mobile app. Scan the QR code on the bike and unclock it. Then you can enjoy your trip.
Bike-sharing is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation. Bicycles can be picked up and left anywhere, making them convenient for users. Besides, it’s cheaper and friendly to the environment. And it also relieves the traffic pressure.
However, problems have arisen. Piles of bicycles are found here and there, making city authorities frustrated. It’s a pity that some of them are damaged badly on purpose.
Hope to ride with you in China.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封书信:假定你是李华, 你的美国朋友Jim来信说对共享单车很感兴趣。 请你给他写封回信,内容包括:1. 单车的使用方法(如:app.查看车辆,扫码开锁等);2. 共享单车的优势(至少两点);3. 单车的使用现状。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:about bike-sharing mentioned in your last letter.(关于上次提到的共享单车);a means of transportation(一种交通方式);the traffic pressure(交通压力);等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。