题目内容
1."校园网"正在征集有关学生活动的英语报导,请用英语写一篇关于我校第13届英语节的短文,字数100-120,首句已给.文中需包含以下主要内容:1.活动时间:今年的三月下旬,持续将近一周
2.活动参加者:所有高一和高二的学生,来自英国的交流生和我校英语老师
3.活动内容:英语角(English corner)、英语歌曲欣赏
英语猜谜比赛(riddle-guessing competition)、英语配音大赛(English dubbing show)等
4.学生的感受和体会
The 13th school English festival was held at the end of this March,and it lasted seven days.
分析 考查提纲类作文写作,部分的文字提示,给考生自由发挥的余地较大,对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力.在完成提纲类作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭.
【亮点说明】范文运用一些常见的短语at the end of在…末尾;have a chance to do 有机会做某事;communicate with与…交流;make friends with与…交朋友;there is no doubt that 毫无疑问;We had a great chance to appreciate English songs in free time and attended the English corner,in which we communicated with some British exchange students and made friends with them.这个句子运用非限制性定语从句;What impressed me most were the English riddle-guessing competition and the English dubbing show,in which my class was awarded prizes这个句子what引导主语从句;
解答 The 13th school English festival was held at the end of this March,and it lasted seven days.All the students from senior one and senior two took an active part in it,including some British exchange students and our English teachers.(高分句型一)
During the festival,we were involved in a variety of activities.We had a great chance to appreciate English songs in free time and attended the English corner,in which we communicated with some British exchange students and made friends with them.(高分句型二)What impressed me most were the English riddle-guessing competition and the English dubbing show,in which my class was awarded prizes.(高分句型三)
There is no doubt that students think highly of such a meaningful and rewarding festival.(高分句型四)The festival lets us develop friendship,showcase our talents and forget our heavy work for a little while.Where there is English festival,there is great fun!
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.