Question

6．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack 来信询问你校开展的"光盘行动"（Clear Your Plate Campaign）的有关事宜．请根据提示给他写一封回信．内容包括：
1．"光盘行动"的目的；
2．"光盘行动"后学生的变化；
3．你的体会．
注意：
1．词数100 左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jack，
I am writing to tell you something about the activity Clear Your Plate Campaign you referred to in your last letter．
                                               
I'm looking forward to having your opinions of the campaign．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息美国朋友Jack 来信询问你校开展的"光盘行动"（Clear Your Plate Campaign）的有关事宜．请根据提示给他写一封回信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点："光盘行动"的目的；"光盘行动"后学生的变化；你的体会． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Before the campaign，many students，unaware of their wasting of food，bought much more than they could eat这句话中用到了插入语的句式，插入了"unaware of their wasting of food"用来修饰students；knowing the significance of saving food after the campaign，more and more students are beginning to buy a proper amount of food for their meals，这句话中用到了动名词作主语的结构，动词know和students之间构成主动关系，用到"knowing the significance of saving food after the campaign"；等等有特色的句子．而且多次用到了很亮采的短语和词汇，如：unaware of，it is essential to，looking forward to，等等．都是具有一定的参考价值的，文章结构鲜明，而且用词新颖，格式整齐．

解答 Dear Jack，
       I am writing to tell you something about the activity Clear Your Plate Campaign you referred to in your last letter．
       Clear Your Plate Campaignis intended to reduce food waste and help students realize how important it is to save food．（高分句型一）Before the campaign，many students，unaware of their wasting of food，bought much more than they could eat and even threw the leftovers without a second thought．（高分句型二）But encouragingly，knowing the significance of saving food after the campaign，more and more students are beginning to buy a proper amount of food for their meals．（高分句型三）
       Personally，it is of great benefit to join in the campaign and form a good habit of clearing the plate．And it is essential to start with ourselves and start from now．Don't you think so？
       I'm looking forward to having your opinions of the campaign．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．