Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

Li Hua is a senior three student who devote himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several courses. In the evening, he studies at home until deep into the night. He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn’t work effectively. In Sunday morning, Li Hua was about to study when his father came up and advised him to have a break. Soon they had good idea. They bought a kite which they liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs where Li Hua enjoyed himself fly the kite. The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday, Li Hua was energetic and actively in class. He said it was only why he had a better weekend.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】devote---devotes

【2】studies---studied

【3】too---so

【4】In---On

【5】加a

【6】去掉it

【7】fly---flying

【8】but---and

【9】actively---active

【10】why---because

【解析】

【1】devote---devotes a senior three student一名高三的学生，作先行词，单数第三人称，一般现在时态，故把devote---devotes。

【2】studies---studied 根据Last Saturday，可知此处用一般过去时态，故把studies---studied。

【3】too---so 固定形式：so---that---,如此---以至于，引导结果状语从句，故把too---so。

【4】In---On 在某天的上午、下午、晚上用on, 故把In---On。

【5】在had 和good之间加a have a good idea有一个好主意，故在had 和good之间加a。

【6】去掉it They bought a kite which they liked it very much根据句意可知这是含定语从句的复合句，a kite是先行词，故it是多余的，因此去掉it。

【7】fly---flying 固定用法：enjoy sb. doing享受某人正在做，故把fly---flying。

【8】but---and 根据句意此处表示递进的并列关系，故把but---and。

【9】actively---active 连系动词后面通常用形容词作表语，故把actively---active。

【10】why---because 根据句意：他说这只是因为他有一个更好的周末。故把why---because。