题目内容
【题目】写作
假设你在刚刚过去的国庆黄金周(Golden Week)里,和家人一起去了北京度假,期间参加了升旗仪式,浏览了名胜古迹,品尝了地方美食。请根据你的所见所闻,向我校校刊写一篇游记。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:flag-raising ceremony
【答案】
In the Golden Week, my family and I went to Beijing for holiday. On Oct. 1st, we got up very early to take part in the flag-raising ceremony on the Tian An Men Square. Watching the flag rising in the brilliant sun, we were quite excited and proud of our motherland, singing together with at least 200,000 people coming from all over the country. During the next few days, we visited the world-famous sights in Beijing, such as / like the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, and certainly the Forbidden City, which has unbelievably large numbers of precious treasures. Also, I talked a lot with foreigners in English there. During the last two days, we walked/idled around the old narrow streets called Hutong, tasted / sampled local snacks as well as delicious exotic foods. Oh! seven days is too short to learn about such a vast city/about this mega city. How I wish I could go and study in my dream university there in two years! In that case, I would have enough time to explore it.
【解析】
试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题:给校刊写一篇关于北京的游记,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。在不遗漏要点的同时可以描写一点北京特色。
【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子:take part in参加,be proud of骄傲,本例文使用了很多非谓语动词,如singing together with at least 200,000 people coming from all over the country.,which has unbelievably large numbers of precious treasures定语从句,seven days is too short to learn about such a vast city运用了too...to...太...以至于...句型,How I wish I could go and study in my dream university there in two years! 感叹句。介绍了the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, and certainly the Forbidden City等北京景点。