题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假设你是李华, 你校学生会准备举办一次元宵节晚会。请你代表学生会给交换生Mike 发一封英文邀请函。主要内容包括:
1. 活动时间:1月22日晚7点到9点
2. 活动地点:铁人广场
3. 活动内容:赏灯、品尝元宵、猜灯谜等
注意:1. 词数100左右 2. 适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
参考词汇: 元宵节:Lantern Festival, 灯笼:lantern, 元宵:sweet dumpling 灯谜: lantern riddle
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I’m writing on behalf of the student union to invite you to join us for a party on January 22 for the coming Lantern Festival.
It is a traditional Chinese festival which falls on the 15th of the first month of lunar calendar. The party is going to take place in Iron Square from 7:00 pm to 9:00pm, during which time we will admire beautiful lanterns of various shapes and sizes, eat delicious sweet dumplings and guess lantern riddles.
It will be a great pleasure if you could come and have fun with us. Not only will you learn more about traditional Chinese culture but also you can have a wonderful time. If you’d like to participate, please let me know at your earliest convenience.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:假设你是李华, 你校学生会准备举办一次元宵节晚会。请你代表学生会给交换生Mike 发一封英文邀请函。主要内容包括:1. 活动时间:1月22日晚7点到9点2. 活动地点:铁人广场3. 活动内容:赏灯、品尝元宵、猜灯谜等。这是一篇明显的提纲作文,就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块,以条目的形式列出以进行写作。考生在审题的时候应该注意审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。题文已经告知要求,那么文体应为书信文体,即介绍主要行程;又根据“你是李华” 写作时即用第一人称“我”,即李华;时态主要用一般现在时即可或一般将来时。考生在写作时应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型,将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识,避开生僻的词汇,并克服母语的干扰,按照英语的习惯方式,用地道的英语表达出来,力求做到语言准确无误。然后根据要点选词组句,然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。
【亮点说明】本文语言凝练,论点鲜明,条理层次清晰。文章第一段介绍写信的目的;第二段就开门见山介绍中国的元宵节;第三段邀请对方来参加晚会。文章使用了which引导的定语从句which falls on the 15th of the first month of lunar calendar(它在阴历年的第一个月份的15日),during which time we will admire beautiful lanterns of various shapes and sizes, eat delicious sweet dumplings and guess lantern riddles(在这期间,我们欣赏各种形状和大小的灯笼,吃美味的甜饼并猜灯谜);not only放在句首的倒装句Not only will you learn more about traditional Chinese culture but also you can have a wonderful time(你不仅学会关于中国传统的节日文化,而且玩地很高兴)。高级短语和结构:on behalf of代表;participate参与。最后一句使用Looking forward to your reply.期待您的回复,给文章一个完美的结束。