题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假定你是重庆第一中学校学生会主席李华,你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛,希望重庆大学外籍教师Brown女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。
注意: 1. 可适当增加细节,使结构完整 2. 词数120左右
词汇:学生会主席 president of Students’ Union
【答案】
Dear Ms. Brown,
I am president of Students’ Union of Chongqing No. 1 Middle School.I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at the English speech contest in our school. We firmly believe , as a famous English professor with rich experience in speech delivering , you are definitely among the most qualified judges for the contest.
The contest will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours on September 1th in room 606,Eight senior high students will speak on the given topic “The Olympic hero(es) in my eyes”,a meaningful topic which will not only present the Olympic spirit but also arouse young people’s love for their country. Meanwhile it will be a perfect chance for you1,
【解析】
试题分析:假定你是重庆第一中学校学生会主席李华,你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛,希望重庆大学外籍教师Brown女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。英语演讲比赛主题:我心目中的奥运英雄时间:9月10日下午;2:00-5:00地点:606教室;参赛选手:8名高中学生;联系人:李华;联系方式Tel-13912345678;Email-12345678@qq.com。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1. 可适当增加细节,使结构完整 2. 词数120左右。
【亮点说明】这是一篇书信,格式正确,要点明确,语言精练,文中使用高级句子。I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at the English speech contest in our school.句中使用动词不定式;as a famous English professor with rich experience in speech delivering ,with的独立主格结构作定语;“The Olympic hero(es) in my eyes”,a meaningful topic which will not only present the Olympic spirit but also arouse young pepole’s love for their country.句中使用which引导的限制性定语从句并运用高级词组not only---but also---。