Question

【题目】假设你是新华中学的李华同学。你们学校将要挑选一批学生赴美国交流学习，你觉得这是一很好的机会，希望能够获得这次机会。请写一封自荐信，包括以下要点：

1. 个人的主要情况；

2. 英语水平；

3. 性格特点和兴趣爱好；

4. 希望通过交流实现的目标。

注意：1.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 字数：100字左右

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua. __________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua. I’m writing this letter to apply for the opportunity to go to America. As a senior school student who is really interested in learning English, I believe that this journey will make a great difference to me.

I have been learning English since I was a child, which contributes to my excellent English capacity nowadays. Not only can I read and write well, but also I am capable of expressing myself in English fluently. Therefore, I’m sure that I can communicate with the students in America well. What’s more, I’m convinced that honesty is the best policy and as a result, most of my classmates love to make friends with me. In my spare time, I read a lot, especially classical English novels. Besides, I’m fond of sports and do exercise on a regular basis to stay healthy.

I hope the journey abroad can help improve my English as well as broaden my horizons, from which I can learn more about the differences and similarities between China and America.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假设你是新华中学的李华同学。你们学校将要挑选一批学生赴美国交流学习，你觉得这是一很好的机会，希望能够获得这次机会。请写一封自荐信，包括以下要点：1.个人的主要情况；2.英语水平；3.性格特点和兴趣爱好；4.希望通过交流实现的目标。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 字数：100字左右

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