题目内容
【题目】假设你是新华中学的李华同学。你们学校将要挑选一批学生赴美国交流学习,你觉得这是一很好的机会,希望能够获得这次机会。请写一封自荐信,包括以下要点:
1. 个人的主要情况;
2. 英语水平;
3. 性格特点和兴趣爱好;
4. 希望通过交流实现的目标。
注意:1.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;2. 字数:100字左右
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. __________________________________________________________
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I’m writing this letter to apply for the opportunity to go to America. As a senior school student who is really interested in learning English, I believe that this journey will make a great difference to me.
I have been learning English since I was a child, which contributes to my excellent English capacity nowadays. Not only can I read and write well, but also I am capable of expressing myself in English fluently. Therefore, I’m sure that I can communicate with the students in America well. What’s more, I’m convinced that honesty is the best policy and as a result, most of my classmates love to make friends with me. In my spare time, I read a lot, especially classical English novels. Besides, I’m fond of sports and do exercise on a regular basis to stay healthy.
I hope the journey abroad can help improve my English as well as broaden my horizons, from which I can learn more about the differences and similarities between China and America.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:假设你是新华中学的李华同学。你们学校将要挑选一批学生赴美国交流学习,你觉得这是一很好的机会,希望能够获得这次机会。请写一封自荐信,包括以下要点:1.个人的主要情况;2.英语水平;3.性格特点和兴趣爱好;4.希望通过交流实现的目标。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;2. 字数:100字左右
【亮点说明】这是一封自荐信,采用三段式,语言朴实,内容丰富,句子衔接紧密,布局合理,使用高级句子。As a senior school student who is really interested in learning English, I believe that this journey will make a great difference to me.定语从句和宾语从句在文中完美结合;I have been learning English since I was a child, which contributes to my excellent English capacity nowadays.现在完成进行时态和非限制性定语从句运用得当;Not only can I read and write well, but also I am capable of expressing myself in English fluently. Not only位于句首使用部分倒装;from which I can learn more about the differences and similarities between China and America. from which引导的非限制性定语从句堪称经典;另外,Therefore, What’s more, In my spare time, Besides,的运用为文章增色添彩。 [
