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【题目】假如你正在参加学校举办的一个英语演讲比赛，就如何应对全球变暖这一话题发表自己的见解，号召同学们过低碳生活，为减少二氧化碳(CO2)排放做贡献。请就这一话题写一篇演讲稿，陈述你自己的观点。

演讲稿应包括以下内容：

1．节能减排，低碳生活，人人可为。

2．改变以往的家庭生活习惯。(用电，用水)

3．出行使用公共交通或骑自行车。

4．……

要求：1.词数：100左右。

2．可适当增加细节内容，以使行文连贯。

3．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

4．提示：低碳生活low carbon life；碳排放carbon emission；燃烧fuel

Good morning, everyone，

My topic today is how to live a low carbon life. As we all know, the earth is becoming warmer and warmer due to the global climate change._________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Good_morning,_everyone，

My_topic_today_is_how_to_live_a_low_carbon_life._As_we_all_know,_the_earth_is_becoming_warmer_and_warmer_due_to_the_global_climate_change. Many people may think that low carbon life is far away from us. However, every one of us can reduce our daily carbon emission by doing something.

Firstly, changing our previous living habit of wasting is the first step. We can use energysaving electricity lights instead of the traditional lights, and turn them off when we don't use them. Never leave the water running when we don't use it. Besides, use the public transport or ride your bicycle instead of driving private cars when we travel somewhere.

It is believed that the global climate change is due to the human activities. Only if we know what we do in our daily life and live a low carbon life can we make a difference.

【解析】试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇演讲稿，采用三段式，内容齐全，条理清晰，衔接紧密，使用高级句子。My topic today is how to live a low carbon life. how+动词不定式作表语；As we all know引导非限制性定语从句；changing our previous living habit of wasting is the first step.动名词短语作主语；and turn them off when we don’t use them. when引导时间状语从句；Even if we have to drive，we’d better plan it well in advance to avoid wasting fuel. Even if引导让步状语从句；It is believed that the global climate change is due to the human activities. it作形式主语，that引导真正的主语从句；Only if we know what we can do in our daily life and live a low carbon life can we make a difference. Only if引起句子部分倒装堪称经典；另外，However，Firstly，Never的运用为文章增色添彩。