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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One day, I was walking along the street while a stranger stopped me and asked me the way to the new restaurant. I told him the route and direction carefully. As soon as I finish, the stranger thanked me a lot of and started off. However, to his surprise, he went at a wrong direction. Then I stopped the men at once and told him that he was wrong. Unexpected, he smiled and told me the truth which he didn't really want to ask the way. But instead he was just trying to know whether everyone knew exactly where the new restaurant, for he was the owner of the restaurant.

Answer 1

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【解析】

【1】表示“正在做. . . . .这时”用be动词+doing. . . . . when句型，因此while改为when。

【2】我仔细告诉他一条通往目的地的路，表示泛指用不定冠词，因此the 改为a。

【3】本文描述的是以前的事，因此用过去时态，finish改为finished。

【4】非常感谢用a lot加强语气，而a lot of是“许多”后面要加名词， 去掉of。

【5】令我惊讶的是，代词错误，his改为my,

【6】朝着一种错误的方向用介词in，. at 改为 in。

【7】我拦下那个人，是一个男人，不用复数形式，men改为man。

【8】出乎意料用副词修饰整个句子，unexpected 改为unexpectedly。

【9】解释事实the truth的内容是同位语从句，用that连接，which 改为 that。

【10】“新饭店在哪里”where the new restaurant was 作动词的宾语，用陈述语序，restaurant 后加was。