Question

【题目】音乐被公认为全人类共同的语言，是我们生活中必不可少的一部分。请你根据以下提示信息，写一篇关于音乐的英语短文。

·音乐的重要性；

·你所知道的音乐类型；

·你最喜欢哪一类音乐？说明你喜欢的理由。

注意：1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

Music is the universal language to all human beings, which plays a very important part in our life. It can make our life more colourful and help us to relax ourselves. Without music, our world would be like a wild desert.

There are different varieties of music, such as popular music, classical music, country music, jazz music, rap music, and rock music.

Of all the music, I like popular music best. For one thing, with beautiful melody, it is pleasant to hear; for another, most popular music deals with the topics of love and friendship, which appeal to us young people.

【解析】

试题分析：音乐被公认为全人类共同的语言，是我们生活中必不可少的一部分。请你根据以下提示信息，写一篇关于音乐的英语短文。1.音乐的重要性；2.你所知道的音乐类型；你最喜欢哪一类音乐？说明你喜欢的理由。注意： 词数100左右。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯.写作时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。避免全部使用简单句。

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