Question

【题目】下面短文中共有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dormitory. Instead, they rented houses outside the school. There are advantages for them all. Living in a dormitory can increase friendship and cooperation among classmates, but of course it is safer. Besides, a dormitory is more like a society, where enables students to learn to get along with each other, thus preparing the social life later. As for renting houses to live lonely, it’s better for your study as you can feel freely in your own room without being interrupted by others. As a result, you can have a plenty of time to devote yourself to review your lessons wholeheartedly. But there may appear a few safety problem as you live outside the school. Anyhow as a student, I prefer living in a dormitory.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】rented→rent

【2】all→both

【3】but→and

【4】where→which

【5】preparing后加for

【6】lonely→alone

【7】freely→free考察形容词。

【8】a plenty of 前方的a去掉

【9】review→reviewing

【10】problem→problems

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇议论文，作者针对现如今一些学生在校外租房子住这一现象提出了自己的看法，并把住在学校宿舍和住校外的优缺点做了对比。最后作者认为作为学生，最后还是住在学校宿舍里。

【1】rented→rent考察动词时态。整篇文章的时态都是一般现在时，所以此处的rent也应该是现在时，不该用过去时。故把rented改成rent。

【2】all→both考察代词。这里的代词代指living in the dormitory和renting houses，属于两种情况，而all是代指三者或三者以上，故把all改成both。

【3】but→and考察连词。“Living in a dormitory can increase friendship and cooperation among classmates，”住在宿舍里可以增进同学间的友谊和合作，和后一句“of course it is safer”之间没有转折关系，而是并列关系。故把but改成and。

【4】where→which考察关系代词。which enables students to learn to get along with each other,是个定语从句，修饰的是名词society，所以要用关系代词which来引导定语从句，而不能用关系副词where。故把where改成which。

【5】preparing后加for考察固定搭配。prepare for…属于固定搭配，意思是为…做准备，preparing for the social life later意思是为以后的社会生活做准备。故在preparing后加for。

【6】lonely→alone考察副词。live是动词，要用副词修饰，lonely是形容词意思是单独的，alone是副词，意思是单独地。故把lonely改成alone。

【7】freely→free考察形容词。feel是系动词，后面加形容词构成系表结构，所以要用形容词free，feel free意思是感到自由的。故把freely改成free。

【8】a plenty of 前方的a去掉考察冠词。plenty of属于固定搭配，前面不加a修饰，意思是大量的，用来修饰不可数名词。故把 a plenty of 前方的a去掉。

【9】review→reviewing考察动名词。devote sb. to doing sth.固定搭配，意思是致力于做某事。devote yourself to reviewing your lessons wholeheartedly.意思是全身心的投入到复习功课中去。故把review改成reviewing。

【10】problem→problems考察名词。a few意思是一些，用来修饰复数名词，所以problem要用复数形式，But there may appear a few safety problems as you live outside the school.意思是住在校外可能会出现一些安全问题。故把problem改成problems。