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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Never I think my sister was a person of fun. So when she asked me to come into her room to play the other day I went to see how bored it was. I smelled candy at the moment I stepped into the room.

It all started on Saturday a voice in my head told me to steal her candy because it was the Easter. I wondered what would happen if I got caught. I did it anyway. I told her there was a present in the kitchen and she rushed for it! After she left, I slide into her room and saw the candy bag lie on the bed. My eyes grew widely and I was day dreaming about how much candy I would have after I stole it. When she found it was me that ate her candy she ran after me around the house for about 30 minute.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】never 后加did

【2】bored改成boring

【3】去at

【4】Saturday 后加when

【5】the Easter去the

【6】slide改成slid

【7】lie改成lying

【8】widely 改成wide

【9】me 改成I

【10】80.minute改成minutes

【解析】

【1】never 后加did；考查部分倒装（否定词+be/助动词+主语+谓语）。Never为否定词，前置于句首所以用部分倒装，根据时态用一般过去时，所以never 后加did。

【2】bored改成boring；bored形容人"无聊的，无趣的，烦人的"；boring形容物“无趣的，单调的，乏味的”.原文中it指事，所以用boring。

【3】去at；at the moment是副词，意为此刻，此时。the moment可用作连词,译为“一……就”，其后才能接从句。

【4】Saturday 后加when；when在此引导定语从句，意为事情始于星期六，脑海里一个声音让我去偷她的糖，因为那天是复活节。

【5】the Easter去the；一般以Day结尾的节日和一些西方传统节日前,都不加冠词。一般以Festival结尾的节日前要加定冠词the。Easter是西方传统节日复活节。

【6】slide改成slid；根据上下文，时态应为一般过去时，所以slide应为过去式slid。

【7】lie改成lying；考查see sb/sth doing sth。句意为我悄悄溜进她的房间，看见糖果袋子躺在床上。所以此处为lying。

【8】widely 改成wide；表达具体的宽用wide 例如open your mouth wide；表达抽象的宽,广泛用widely;例如 English is used widely.此处My eyes grew wide应为具体的。

【9】me 改成I；it was ate her candy，强调的是主语我，所以应该用I，而me是宾格。

【10】minute改成minutes；30分钟为复数形式，所以应该加s。