Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，你和笔友Mike互寄了全家的合影。Mike看了合影后来信问为什么你没有兄弟姐妹。请用英语写封100字左右的回信说明情况。内容包括以下几点：

原因	⒈二十世纪八十年代开始实行计划生育； ⒉大部分中国家庭是独生子女。
看法	⒈能受到好的教育；父母关爱更多； ⒉孤独、自私，生活能力差； ⒊建议多交朋友。

注意：⒈可适当增加细节使行文连贯；
⒉字数100左右；
⒊开头已给出，不计入总字数；
⒋参考词汇：计划生育family program独生子女the only child
Dear Mike,
Thank you for your letter and the photo of your family.
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

Thank you for your letter and the photo of your family. Now I am writing to tell you why I am the only child in my family.

As you know, the population of China is growing very fast. In order to control the rapid increase of population, in the 1980s the government of China began to put into practice the family program---one child for each couple. As a result, most families have only one child. The child in the family can get more love from the family and chances to get better education. On the other hand, the only child is selfish, and not so independent. Sometimes they feel lonely. I think, every only child like me should learn to make more friends.

I hope that we write more often to each other.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给笔友Mike写一封信，写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。写作时考生需要：第一步：认真审题，提炼要点 一审格式：本文是书信体裁。二审结构：按书信格式分为开头、正文和结尾；正文应包括目前存在的现象、原因和看法。三审要点：用英语思维，理出写作要点。第二步：紧扣主题，扩点成句；第三步：补充修改，连句成篇。范文中用到连词As you know, As a result, On the other hand, I think, 使行文更加连贯