题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华, 是某中学国际部的一名学生。你有幸做外教Chris的向导, 带领他去当地一家餐馆品尝中国美食。请你按如下提示给对方写一封邮件, 告知这次行程安排。
1. 饭店情况 2. 出发时间、地点3. 交通方式
注意:1. 词数80左右 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:specialty 特色菜
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【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m so honored to serve as your guide to a local restaurant to taste traditional Chinese food. The restaurant enjoys a good reputation and has won a China Time-honored Brand title. The environment is clean and elegant, not to mention its high-quality dishes as well as its top services. The traditional and unique soup dumplings are its specialty, which I do believe you will have a good feast on.
By the way, it is convenient to get there by bus, for it is just within easy reach of the downtown. We will meet at the bus stop near our school this Sunday morning. Bus No. 9 will directly take us there.
Wish you a good time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,告知行程安排。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.表达荣幸
2.告知相关情况
1)饭店情况。(introduction to the restaurant)
2)出发时间、地点。(time and place to meet )
3) 交通方式。(way to get there)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be honored to; enjoy a good reputation; not to mention; as well as ; traditional and unique; convenient; within easy reach; directly
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m so honored to serve as your guide to a local restaurant to taste traditional Chinese food.
2. The restaurant enjoys a good reputation
3. not to mention its high-quality dishes as well as its top services.
4. The traditional and unique soup dumplings are its specialty
5. it is convenient to get there by bus, for it is just within easy reach of the downtown.
6. Bus No. 9 will directly take us there.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改