Question

【题目】请以老师当众表扬你为话题，用下面所给句子开头，续写一篇英语短文。

It is a great honor as well as a pleasure for me to be praised by the teacher publicly before my classmates.

注意：1. 续写词数100个左右；

2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

Answer 1

【答案】

It is a great honor as well as a pleasure for me to be praised by the teacher publicly before my classmates.

When young, I was very shy. I didn't dare to speak in public. When the teacher asked me to answer a question, I was always too nervous to answer it, which made me very sad.

One day, the teacher asked me to come to his office, where he told me to recite a text. I recited it fluently. The teacher praised me and told me I would recite it the next day before my classmates. I told him that I was too nervous, but he insisted that I should do it. The next morning, Although I did poorly, the teacher praised me highly.

After being frequently praised before my classmates, I began to gain confidence and tried even harder. Eventually，I overcame my shyness. It was the teacher's praise that made me become a better student.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于开放性作文，以老师当众表扬你为话题。本文作者以记叙文的形式展开叙述，以从小很害羞不敢当众发表自己的观点，后来经过个人努力，克服了缺点，最后取得成功。开放性作文对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。