Question

【题目】书面表达

假定你是李华，贵校在学生中征集意见，询问学生是否赞成开设iPad课堂（iPad classrooms）。你支持开设iPad名师点拨

短文改错主要考查学生对冠词、名词、形容词、副词、固定搭配、主谓一致、同位语从句、被动语态、时态等语法知识的掌握情况。做短文改错之前应该首先确定全文的时态。众所周知，情态动词、助动词和be动词后跟动词原形，所以带be的固定搭配一定不要漏掉be。比如10小题，will后跟动词原形，be proud of因---而自豪，故在will后加be。常见的这类词组有be proud of因---而自豪；be pride in因---而自豪；be faced with面临着---；be full of充满了---；be filled with 被---填满；be interested in 对---感兴趣；be satisfied with 对---感到满意。

考点：考查短文改错

课堂；请给校长写一封建议信，要点如下：

1. 资源丰富；

2. 促进交流；

3. 利于环保；

4. 其他理由。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好。

Dear Headmaster,

We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPad classrooms.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Headmaster,

We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPad classrooms. I am in favor of this plan for the following reasons. To begin with, everyone learns differently. Students can customize their iPad with materials that fit their level and learning style, and thus tailor it to different needs. Moreover, when connected to the Internet, students can interact with teachers and classmates about what they learn more conveniently. For the sake of environmental protection, opening iPad classrooms is a good way to save trees that we have been cutting down for paper. Most importantly, I believe students will develop their interests in the subjects by enjoying a new way of learning.

I hope you would take my ideas into consideration and we look forward to attending an iPad class.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假定你是李华，贵校在学生中征集意见，询问学生是否赞成开设iPad课堂（iPad classrooms）。你支持开设iPad课堂；请给校长写一封建议信，要点如下：1. 资源丰富；2. 促进交流；3. 利于环保；4. 其他理由。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。

【亮点说明】

To begin with, everyone learns differently.句中使用动词不定式的独立成分；Students can customize their iPad with materials that fit their level and learning style, and thus tailor it to different needs.定语从句和并列句完美结合；Moreover, when connected to the Internet, students can interact with teachers and classmates about what they learn more conveniently.过去分词作状语和介词的宾语从句巧妙用于同一句中；For the sake of environmental protection, opening iPad classrooms is a good way to save trees that we have been cutting down for paper.动名词短语作主语，并在句中使用定语从句；I hope you would take my ideas into consideration and we look forward to attending an iPad class.句中运用宾语从句和并列句。