题目内容
【题目】书面表达
在我国,随着汽车数量的增加,交通堵塞现象越来越严重,环境也被污染了。一些环保人士开始提倡骑自行车。根据下面提示写一篇100个词左右的英语短文。
1. 在中国,自行车是最为流行的交通工具。 2. 骑自行车有许多好处。(最少2点) 3. 你个人看待自行车的未来…… |
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【答案】
The bicycle is the most popular means of transport in China. People ride it for various purposes such as going to and from school and work. Bicycles are very cheap and easy to buy in China.
There are many advantages of riding a bicycle. Firstly, compared with cars powered by gas, bicycles can do good to saving energy and reducing the air pollution. Taking up less space, a bicycle also lightens the traffic jams. Most importantly, people can keep healthy by riding a bicycle regularly.
In my view, the future of the bicycle will be bright because some city governments have built special paths for bicycle riders and provided “public bicycles” to travel round the city center free of charge. Bicycles will be popular again in China.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语such as比如;do good to 对。。有好处;take up占据;Most importantly最重要的是;in one’s view在某人看来;free of charge免费;Firstly, compared with cars powered by gas, bicycles can do good to saving energy and reducing the air pollution这个句子中运用到非谓语动词;Taking up less space, a bicycle also lightens the traffic jams这个句子运用taking做伴随状语