Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件，邀请他加入，内容包括：1. 球队活动；

2. 报名方式及截止日期。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Eric，

I am Li Hua．I'm writing to inform you that my school's table tennis team is recruiting new players．（高分句型一）I know you are good at playing Ping pong，so I want to invite you to join the team and to be a member of it．

Table tennis is very popular with students in our school，and because our school table tennis equipment is perfect，our school often holds many big activities，for example，"Harmonious Cup"table tennis match and middle school table tennis championship．（高分句型二）If you join the team，you can get systematic training and compete with high level players in the events．We hope you will accept our invitation．You can download the registration form our school website and fill it out and send it to the school email box．Registration deadline is July 31，2017．If you have any questions，please write to me．

I am looking forward to your reply．

Best wishes，

yours，

Li Hua．

【解析】

本题考查书信类作文。首先要认真审题，假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：1.球队活动；2.报名方式及截止日期。其次要确定时态，表示将要发生的事情，所以这篇文章要使用一般将来时。然后要确定文章的结构，文章开头简要说明你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员，接着详细说明具体内容，文章最后期待着对方早日给自己回信。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式，词数控制在一百左右。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了使用了一些高级句型。例如：I sincerely hope you could join us. 这里含有一个宾语从句。Don’t hesitate to ask me if you have any questions. 这里含有一个条件状语从句。