Question

假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom从网上看到“中国式过马路”（Chinese style of crossing roads）的相关报道后，给你写信询问有关情况。现请你根据以下内容提示，给他写一封回信。要点如下：

1. 介绍何为“中国式过马路”（参看图画内容）

2. 分析原因 (不认为行人闯红灯违法，缺少安全意识)；

3. 指出危害（在斑马线事故频发，死伤人数多）；

4. 你的看法或希望……

注意：1. 可适当补充细节，以使文章充实连贯；

2. 词数：120左右。

词汇：斑马线 zebra line 安全意识safety awareness  冒犯者 offender

Dear Tom,

How nice to hear from you again. I learn you want to know about Chinese style of crossing roads. ________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

How nice to hear from you again. I learn you want to know about Chinese style of crossing roads. Here’s what I know about it.

“Chinese style of crossing roads” refers to a group of people crossing a road at the crossroads no matter whether the traffic light is green or red. Indeed, this is normally seen in some cities. As a result, many traffic accidents happen at the crossroads or on the zebra line, causing many deaths and injuries.

This phenomenon shows that some people are lacking in safety awareness and some wrongly believe it safe for so many people to cross roads together. Some even think the law won’t punish so many offenders. Therefore, the group effect takes shape and some relevant laws have been ignored.

To our delight, strict laws have been passed to punish those who run the red light. Besides, people have come to get rid of the bad style of crossing roads nowadays.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文的话题是“中国式过马路”就是指一些人不顾红灯，直接过马路。原因和危害在要点里都列了出来。看法和希望：考生可以提出加强交通安全教育，以多种方式提升国民的交通意识等等。从这些方面着手。提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。