Question

假如你是李华。你的外籍教师Mr. Brown想让其五岁的儿子学

汉语，他你发来电子邮件，询问去你市那所学校学习更好。请根据以

下提示给他回一封邮件，推荐育英语言学校。

         1．该校有20余年的对外汉语教学经验；

         2．接受不同教育程度和背景的学生

         3．教学内容丰富，授课方式生动灵活。

Dear Mr. Brown，

                                                                                         

                                                                                           

                                                                                          

                                                                                          

                                                                                           

                                                                                          

                                                                                          

                                                                                           

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Mr. Brown,

     I’m very glad to know that you want your 5-year-old son to learn Chinese. Here I’d like to introduce you a well-known language school in our city. Yu Ying Language School.

     The language school, which has over twenty years of experience in teaching foreign students Chinese, accept students from all over the world, regardless of their educational level and background. The school curriculum includes Chinese culture, everyday communication, written and spoken Chinese. All the teachers there have developed a special method so that they can make their classes interesting and lively. Many foreign students can use Chinese freely when leaving school.

     If you need to know anything else, do not hesitate to contact me.

                                                                            Yours,

                                                                            Li Hua

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【亮点说明】 范文中出现一引起高级短语，如 regardless of ,尽管，be glad to do 高兴做某事 ，would like to do 愿意做某事。在此句中The language school, which has over twenty years of experience in teaching foreign students Chinese, accept students from all over the world, regardless of their educational level and background不仅仅有which 引导的非限制性定语从句，还与regardless of 连用，使句子赋予变化。All the teachers there have developed a special method so that they can make their classes interesting and lively运用so that 句型结构，使文章看起来更加紧凑。文中还出现一此高级词汇，如 experience , background, curriculum, communication, method, intresting, lively ,为文章增色不少。

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