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13．为了营造一种"多读书，读好书"的良好氛围，我班将举行一次主题班会，要求以"A good book can affect our life"为题作演讲，向同学们介绍一本自己读过的好书，并谈谈自己的感悟．注意：1．字数：120个词左右讲稿的开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）．
Boys and girls，
As Francis Bacon once said，reading makes a full man．A good book can affect our life in one way or another．My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart．It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period．
From the book，I learned that whenever we come across difficulties or even misfortune，we should never give in or run away．Instead，we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out．Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world，but also wash our souls．To live an enjoyable and meaningful life，let's read more good books!
That's all．Thank you!

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分析 本文是应用文，根据所给提示写一篇演讲稿．向同学们介绍一本自己读过的好书，并谈谈自己的感悟．属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第三人称为主．时态以一般现在时为主．重要短语：in one way or another（以这种或另一种方法），one such book （一本这样的书），overcame physical disabilities（克服身体上的残疾），come across（偶遇），give in（屈服），run away （逃跑），be supposed to do（应该做某事），not only…，but also…（不但，而且），live a…life（过…生活）．

解答 Boys and girls，
 As Francis Bacon once said，reading makes a full man．A good book can affect our life in one way or another．My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart．It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period．（介绍一本自己读过的好书）
 From the book，I learned that whenever we come across difficulties or even misfortune，we should never give in or run away．【高分句型】Instead，we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out．Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world，but also wash our souls．【高分句型】To live an enjoyable and meaningful life，let's read more good books!【高分句型】（自己的感悟）
That's all．Thank you!

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．