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4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I was really sad while I found my bicycle went wrong again．Tired of repairing it again and again，I decided buy a new one．After school，I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called Jack．The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store．It looked very cool that I could hardly wait to ride ft．The shopkeeper told us that it was the latest style．He wanted to charge me for 800yuan，that was too high for me．I just couldn't afford such an expensive one．Then I choose another one，which cost him only 200yuan．It was not perfect，so it was much better than the old one．

分析 本文主要讲述作者厌烦总是修理自行车．当自行车又坏了的时候，便决定买一辆新车．作者和同学一到达商店便喜欢上一辆黑色的自行车，但要800元，作者觉得太贵了，最后，仅花了200元买了一辆，作者认为虽不完美，但比旧车要好．

解答 I was really sad while I found my bicycle went wrong again．Tired of repairing it again and again，I decided∧buy a new one．After school，I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called Jack．The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store．It looked very cool that I could hardly wait to ride it．The shopkeeper told us that it was the latest style．He wanted to charge me for 800yuan，that was too high for me．I just couldn't afford such an expensive one．Then I choose another one，which cost him only 200yuan．It was not perfect，so it was much better than the old one．
详解：
1．while改为when 考查连词．while引导的时间状语从句表示"段"时间，此处应是"点"时间，用连词when．           
2．加to 考查动词不定式．decide to do sth．意为"决定做某事"，是固定词组．
3．locating改为located 考查过去分词．shop与locate之间是动宾关系，用过去分词短语located  in the center of the city作后置定语．
4．The改为A 考查冠词．本句不是特指，而是泛指一辆黑色的自行车，用不定冠词a．
5．very改为so 考查固定搭配．so…that…意为"如此/这么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副词，常常用来修饰形容词或副词，常用句型为：主语+谓语+so+adj．/adv．+that从句．
6．去掉for 考查词语用法．charge sb some money意为"向某人要…钱"，是固定词组．
7．that改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词800 yuan在从句中作主语，用关系代词which．
8． choose改为chose 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是已发生的事情，用一般过去时．
9．him改为me 考查代词．根据句意：它仅花了我200元．用代词me． 
10．so改为but 考查连词．前后两个单句之间是转折关系，而非因果关系，用连词but．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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