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7.假如你是高一学生王刚,通过半年的学习,你对高中的英语教与学有了一定的了解,也有不少问题想和你的英语老师Mrs.Liu探讨和沟通,同时也想给你的英语老师提些建议,所以在放假之前你发一个e-mail给Mrs.Liu.信的内容应包括以下几个方面:
1)感谢英语老师半年来的辛勤工作;
2)自己在学习中的几个问题,如单词记不住,语法怎么学等;
3)给老师的教学建议,如尽可能用英语授课,作业布置适量等;
注意:
1)不要逐条翻译,应适当发挥;
2)字数为120左右;            
3)不得使用真实姓名;
(开头已给出,不计入总字数)
Dear Mrs.Liu,
How time flies!I have been your student for nearly half a year.To begin with,I want to_______________________________________________________________________________
 
_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully,
Wang Gang.

分析 本文是一篇书信体裁的书面表达,开头结尾已经给出,所以不用注意格式,只要把内容呈现出来即可,但因为是给老师写信,说话的语气和措辞要礼貌,尽量用上一些高级的句型和词汇,比如表示感激的I will be appreciate it if you can …..; Iwould be grateful if you …..; thank you for ….等,表示有困难短语:have difficulty with sth;have trouble in doing sth等.因为提示要点包括三个方面,所以在结构安排上,可以采用三段式.此外,在连词成篇时,要恰当使用连接词,以使语言通顺流畅.
【亮点说明】范文使用典型的三段式结构,分别表达了对老师的感激,自己学习中的困难以及给老师的教学建议等,结构紧凑,层次分明.在文中作者使用了to begin with,besides,to be honest,what's more 等插入语和副词,使文章语言衔接自然流畅.在提出建议时使用了could you please speak more English inClass?和Would you please reduce the amount of English homework?等提出请求,这样使得语气更加委婉,增强了建议的可接纳性.

解答 Dear Mrs.Chen,
How time flies!I have been your student for nearly half a year.To begin with,I want to say thanks to you for your hard work in the past few months.Without your help,we couldn't have made such great progress in English.(高分句型一)(表达感谢)We have learned a lot about senior English teaching and learning,but still there are some problems.For me,I can't keep so many new words in mind,not to mention how to use them.Also,grammar is a big problem to me.I often mix up these grammatical rules.Would you please help me with those problems?(遇到的问题)
Mrs.Chen,we all like you and your teaching method.As we hope to improve our listening ability,could you please speak more English in Class?(高分句型二)And we can't bear so much homework of nine subjects,so would you please reduce the amount of English homework?(高分句型三)I will be appreciate it if you can give me some advice.(寻求建议)
Best wishes to you and your family!
Yours faithfully,
Wang Gang.

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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