题目内容

3．【写作内容】
1．出生日期：1991年12月1日；
2．出生地点：杭州；
3．个人情况：中国泳坛明星，中国人的骄傲；
4．毕业学校：浙江大学；
5．专长：大学毕业后专攻长距离自由泳*；
6．成绩：伦敦奥运会获两块金牌；2013年巴塞罗那**"世界锦标赛"***男子400米、800米、1500米自由泳冠军，4 x 200米自由泳接力季军，
7．并被评为本届世锦赛最佳男运动员，成为历史上首次获得这一奖项的亚洲游泳选手．
参考词汇：自由泳*freestyle swimming   巴塞罗那**Barcelona    世界锦标赛***championships
【写作要求】
1．只能使用五个句子表达全部内容；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校．
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯．

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一篇关于介绍我国著名的游泳运动员--孙杨的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般过去时，内容要点包括：1．出生日期：1991年12月1日；2．出生地点：杭州；3．个人情况：中国泳坛明星，中国人的骄傲；4．毕业学校：浙江大学；5．专长：大学毕业后专攻长距离自由泳；6．成绩：伦敦奥运会获两块金牌；2013年巴塞罗那"世界锦标赛"男子400米、800米、1500米自由泳冠军，4x 200米自由泳接力季军，7．并被评为本届世锦赛最佳男运动员，成为历史上首次获得这一奖项的亚洲游泳选手．
重点短语与句型：
be proud of对…感到自豪，骄傲
concentrate on 集中注意力
win the third place 赢第三名
What's more而且，此外
高分句型一：Sun Yang，born in Hangzhou on Dec 1，1991，is a Chinese swimming star，who we Chinese are proud of．此句用了过去分词born作后置定语，以及who引导的定语从句
高分句型二：What's more，Sun Yang was awarded the best male swimmer of 2013 World Championships，becoming the first Asian swimmer to win such an award in history．此句用了现在分词作结果状语，顺其自然的结果．

解答 Sun Yang，born in Hangzhou on Dec 1，1991，is a Chinese swimming star，who we Chinese are proud of（高分句型一）．
After graduating from Zhejiang University he has concentrated on long-distance freestyle swimming．
Besides winning two gold medals in London Olympic Games，he even eventually achieved his goal of becoming champions in men's 400m，800m and 1，500m freestyle events in the World Swimming Championships in Barcelona．
At the same time，together with his teammates，he also won the third place in the men's 4x200 meters freestyle relay in the Barcelona World Championships．
What's more，Sun Yang was awarded the best male swimmer of 2013 World Championships，becoming the first Asian swimmer to win such an award in history．（高分句型二）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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