题目内容
【题目】短文改错,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
Dear Sir,
I’m glad to recommend my friend Li Ming to you. Li Ming was born on July 15, 1974 in Beijing. When he was in the middle school, he did well in several subject, including math, physics and chemistry and was fond with art. Later, his efforts paid off when he admitted into Beijing University majoring in physics. Before four years of hard work there, he went to abroad for further education. Because of his excellent work and performance, he gets a doctor’s degree this year. He is now in good health but would like to come back home to make contributions to our country. I will be most gratefully if you consider his recommendation and offer him a job in your company.
Looking forward to receive your early reply.
Yours truly,
Wang Lin
【答案】
【1】subject改为subjects
【2】with改为of
【3】was 加在admitted前
【4】Before改为After
【5】went to(删去to)
【6】gets改为got
【7】but改为and
【8】gratefully改为grateful
【9】his改为my
【10】receive改为receiving
【解析】
试题分析:本文属于应用文,是一篇推荐信,王明向对方推荐自己的朋友李明,并在文章中介绍了李明的具体情况。
【1】subject改为subjects 考查名词单复数。名词“subject科目”是一个可数名词,前面有形容词several修饰,说明应该使用复数形式subjects。
【2】with改为of 考查形容词短语。形容词短语be fond of喜欢....;句意:当他在中学的时候,在很多学科上表现很好,包括数学、物理和化学,也很喜欢美术课。
【3】在admitted前 加was 考查被动语态。短语be admitted into....被...录取;句意:后来他的努力得到了回报,被北京大学录取。
【4】Before改为After 考查介词。句意:在大学四年努力以后,他去国外深造。本句使用after“在...之后”属于常识,通常都是大学以后去国外。
【5】went to(删去to) 考查副词。本句中副词abroad在国外,去国外,该词不能做动词短语go to的宾语。名词或代词才可以做宾语。所以删除to。
【6】gets改为got 考查时态。这部分使用了一般过去时,介绍Li Ming过去的学习生活,要使用一般过去时。所以本句使用got。
【7】but改为and 考查连词。句意:现在他的身体很好,也想回国为国家做贡献。上下文之间是顺接关系,所以使用并列连词and连接上下文。
【8】greatfully改为grateful 考查形容词。在英语中通常使用形容词和系动词连用构成系表结构。句意:如果你考虑我的推荐并给他提供一份工作,我会非常感激的。
【9】his改为my 考查代词。本文中王林向对方推荐李明,请对方考虑自己的推荐。所以使用动词my代替自己。
【10】receive改为receiving 考查动名词。动词短语look forward to sth/doing sth期待...,其中的to是介词,后面要接名词或动名词做宾语。所以本句使用动名词receiving做宾语。