题目内容
16.作为即将进入高三的学生,你对你的大学有何期许?请以"My dream of going to university"为题写一篇100字左右的英语文章.
请在写作中告知你理想的大学,你选择这所大学的两点原因,并对大学生活做简单的展望.
分析 本文是一篇话题作文,根据所给题目"My dream of going to university",写一篇短文,畅想自己的大学生活.写作时人称用第一人称,时态为一般现在时.
写作要点:1.理想大学;2.理想大学专业及生活;3.目标及决心.
重要短语:
dream of(梦想);root in(根植于);come true(实现);take part in(参加);devote oneself to(致力于);endeavor to(努力)
高分句型:
1.This dream has been rooted in my heart for the following reasons.灵活运用root in等短语,达到自然过渡的效果.
2.For one thing,the school has my favorite major--law,in which I take great interest.该句为非限制性定语从句.
3.If my dream can come true,not only will I devote myself to my study but also I will endeavor to perfect myself by joining clubs and taking part in various activities.
该句运用not only…,but also…句型,主将从现,endeavor to,take part in等短语.
解答 Ever since middle school,I have dreamed of going to Wuhan University.(点明主题)
This dream has been rooted in my heart for the following reasons.(高分句型1)For one thing,the school has my favorite major--law,in which I take great interest.(高分句型2)For another,it is near my hometown,so it is very convenient for me to go home if I miss my parents.If my dream can come true,not only will I devote myself to my study but also I will endeavor to perfect myself by joining clubs and taking part in various activities.(高分句型3)(梦想及目标)
I know there is still a long way to go,but I will never give up in pursuing my dream.(做出总结)
点评 话题类作文在写作时要注意内容是否切合所给主题,包含所给要点,写作时注意正确运用时态,上下文注意连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需要注意积累短语和重要句型.

One reason is that if we give up too easily,we will hardly achieve anything.It is not unusual for us to fail in our first attempt at something new,so we should not feel disappointed and should try again.Besides,if we always give up when we fail,we will not be able to develop new skills and grow.
Another reason we should never give up is that we can learn from our mistakes so that we can not make the same ones.If we do not try again,the lesson we have learned is wasted.
Finally,we should never give up because as we work to reach our goals,we develop confidence,and this confidence can help us succeed in other areas of our lives.If we never challenge ourselves,we will begin to doubt our abilities.
In short,it is important that we do not give up when working for our goals.Whether we succeed in the end or not,we will learn something,and what we learn will help us to become better and more confident.Furthermore,if we give up,we have no chance of attaining our goals any more,but if we keep making great efforts,there is always a chance that we will succeed one day.
Topic:Never Give Up
Possible meanings and the author's opinions | ?The words"Never give up"can (56)encourage others or oneself and express one's determination. ?A person who wants to (57)succeed should have the quality.So we should never give up. |
The (58)reasons | ?If we give up too easily,maybe we will achieve (59)nothing,so when we fail in our first attempt at something new,we should not(60)disappoint ourselves but try again. ?Always giving up means that we will not be able to (61)make any progress. ?Never giving up will make us learn from the mistakes we've made before and learn the (62)lesson so as not to make the same mistakes. ?To reach our goals and develop the confidence which can help us (63)improveourselves,we must not give up but challenge ourselves. |
(64)Conclusion | If you give up,you will have no (65)chance/opportunityof reaching your goals.Never give up and you will attain your goals sooner or later. |
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