题目内容
【题目】假如你是James,在收到祖父的戒烟建议信后,很受触动。请你写一封E-mail回信给祖父,
陈述你对于吸烟危害的重新认识及所采 用的有效的戒烟方法,并表达对祖父的感激之情。
文章开头和结尾已经给出。
写作要求:
1. 在信中要包括两点对于吸烟危害的认识和两点有效的戒烟方法。
2. 不要分条列举,可适当增加细节。
3. 字数:120左右。
Dear Grandad,
It is a peaceful night while I'm sitting at the computer writing to you with a willing heart.
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Yours truly,
James
【答案】It is a peaceful night while I'm sitting at the computer writing to you with a willing heart.
Smoking, which may be a pleasure for some people, is a series of discomforts for their fellows. Medical scientists have expressed their concern about the effect of smoking on the health not only of those who are smoking but also of those who live in the air polluted by tobacco smoke. And studies show that non-smokers suffer more than the smokers themselves.
A great number of students have joined in trying to persuade the university to forbid smoking. Smoking is not allowed in theatres, cinemas and in other public places. Therefore, smoking must be forbidden in our classrooms.
Although many people have passed away for having smoked a lot and we call on people to give up smoking, yet many more will turn down what we say every day. I think it more important to call on the smoker to use good judgment and to show concern for others.
Yours truly,
James
【解析】试题分析:
本文要求收到祖父的戒烟建议信后,给祖父回复一封E-mail,陈述自己对于吸烟危害的重新认识及所采用的有效的戒烟方法,并表达对祖父的感激之情。文章给出了提纲,成文时应注意以下几点:(1) 不需要分条列举,在信中要包括两点对于吸烟危害的认识和两点有效的戒烟方法。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态:一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型,以增加文章的档次。
【亮点说明】
1.使用高级句型:包含非限制性定语从句的句子Smoking, which may be a pleasure for some people, is a series of discomforts for their fellows.;使用定语从句的句子…not only of those who are smoking but also of those who live in the air polluted by tobacco smoke. ;宾语从句yet many more will turn down what we say every day.;使用it作形式宾语I think it more important to call on the smoker to use good judgment and to show concern for others.2.使用了过渡词语:therefore, although,yet等。3.使用了重要句型和短语: not only …but also不仅…而且;more than多于,不止,超过;a great number of很多;pass away去世;turn down拒绝.