题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华。你的美国网友Jackson在邮件中询问你最喜欢的艺术家。就此请你用英语给他回一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.介绍你最喜欢的艺术家;
2.陈述你的理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jackson,
I’m glad to hear that you have interest in painting.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jackson,
I’m glad to hear that you have interest in painting. It happens that painting is my favorite. I always spend much time painting a picture like many famous painters. Among those great people, I like Van Gogh best. I think he is the most outstanding impressionist, and his works always leave me a large space to apreciate their beauty of art. Another reason why I like him so much is that he was a determined person although he failed many times during his creation. I can see his positive attitude and passion for life through his work “Sunflowers”, which teaches me to keep going forward regardless of the difficulties of life.
I can’t wait to know your favorite painters. Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:这是一篇以邮件形式的作文,要求给美国网友Jackson回一封电子邮件,内容包括:介绍你最喜欢的艺术家;陈述你的理由。注意邮件的格式,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】
本文是一封电子邮件,本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。It happens that painting is my favorite.it是形式主语,that从句是真正的主语;I think he is the most outstanding impressionist使用宾语从句;Another reason why I like him so much is that he was a determined person although he failed many times during his creation.why引导的定语从句和so―――that引导的结果状语从句完美结合;which teaches me to keep going forward regardless of the difficulties of life.which引导非限制性定语从句。