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17.毕业在即,回首往日的岁月,一定有人值得你感谢.请按下面给出的要点用英语写一封120~150词的感谢信,以便上传至校园网英文页面"Student Voice"(学生心声)栏目.
1.简述收信人对你的帮助及你的受益情况.
2.表达你的谢意.
3.表达你的决心:继续努力,以优异的成绩回报对方.

分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们给对你有帮助的人写一封感谢信,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般过去时,内容要点包括:简述收信人对你的帮助及你的受益情况.表达你的谢意.表达你的决心:继续努力,以优异的成绩回报对方.我们此篇作文分为两部分,第一部分为简述收信人对你的帮助及你的受益情况.表达你的谢意.第二部分为表达你的决心:继续努力,以优异的成绩回报对方.
重点短语与句型:
be capable of 有能力做某事
inspire sb to do sth鼓舞某人做某事
remain determined保持坚定的决心
make…proud of…使…为…感到自豪
高分句型一:I want to thank you for always being there for me,and for teaching me that I am capable of accomplishing anything that I put my mind to.此句两个that,第一个that为宾语从句,第二个that为定语从句,先行词anything在定语从句中作宾语.
高分句型二:My hard work and determination will help me pass the college entrance exams,after which I can be admitted to a university.此句after which 为定语从句,介词+关系代词.

解答 With my upcoming graduation from senior middle school,I have put much thought into who helped me the most and it is you.I want to thank you for always being there for me,and for teaching me that I am capable of accomplishing anything that I put my mind to.(高分句型一)Your kind words and constant support have always inspired me to work hard and remain determined,even when things seem difficult.You are a strong,intelligent woman and I want to make you proud of me,just as I am proud of you.(简述收信人对你的帮助及你的受益情况.表达你的谢意.)
My hard work and determination will help me pass the college entrance exams,after which I can be admitted to a university.(高分句型二)My future success in college will surely make you proud of me.Thank you for always being there to guide me through life's obstacles.(表达你的决心:继续努力,以优异的成绩回报对方.)
With love and admiration.
Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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5.BERLIN (Reuters)-Germany's postal service has announced plans to explore improved service and help protect the environment by getting"fetch friends"-ordinary people traveling across cities-to deliver parcels on their way.
It is hoped that the move,which will be tested in the coming months,might lessen traffic in inner cities and reduce CO2 emissions(排放).This should help DHL,a division of the German postal service,reach its target of improving the company's carbon efficiency by 30 percent before 2020.
"As the world's biggest logistics(物流) provider,we recognize a special responsibility to reduce the impact on the environment as much as possible,"said Frank Appel,Chief Executive Officer of Deutsche Post DHL,in a statement referring to a variety of measures being considered.
The"fetch friends"find out online about parcels that need delivering to people who live or work along the way that they are planning to travel through the city.They then select the ones that they want to take.
Codes(编码) sent to their mobile phones tell the volunteers where to pick the packages up.Parcels can be taken part of the way or passed on to another volunteer but all volunteers need to have the right code on their mobile phone so the track and trace system can be updated.
Logistics companies will be responsible for looking after the operation to make sure that the privacy of post is respected.
It's hoped that this could be done using mobile phones but DHL says it recognizes that some security issues remain to be worked out.

67.According to the passage,the"fetch friend"programD.
A.has been tested for months
B.aims to reduce the cost of the service
C.employs environmentalists to help with deliveries
D.encourages ordinary people to help cut the carbon footprint
68.Which of the following statements is TRUE of DHL?A
A.It belongs to the Germany's postal service.
B.It has the most up-to-date tracking system in Germany.
C.It has succeeded in improving its carbon efficiency by 30%.
D.It has designed many measures to improve its service speed.
69.What may be a problem with the new service according to the article?C
A.Volunteers'not allowing to select parcels.
B.The wrong codes in the mobile phones.
C.The possibility that parcels could be opened on the way.
D.Parcels'being taken to the destination by a single volunteer.
70.What might be the best Title for the best passage?B
A.New Challenges for the Postal Service
B.A Greener Way to Deliver Parcels
C.Solutions for Global Warming
D.Statements from DHL.

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