题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,是一名刚升入高中的高一新生。请你给自己的初中同学Mary写一封信,简要介绍一下自己这两个月的高中生活体会。
内容要点:
1)之前想念过去的老师和同学;现在适应了高中的生活
2)与同学相处很好,交了好多朋友。。
3)老师工作认真,尊重他们
4)一定努力学习,三年以后考上好的大学。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行为连贯;
3.开头语和结束语己为你写好.不计入总词数
Dear Mary,
How time flies!
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Best wishes,
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】DearMary,
How time flies! I have been in high school for two months. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.
I felt a little lonely at the beginning ,which made me miss all the teachers and classmates in Junior High school. But now, I have got used to my new school life. Not only do I get along well with my new classmates but I have made many new friends. Besides, the teachers here are strict with us so that I like and respect them very much. In a word, I’ll make good use of my time and make an effort to study well, because it is my dream to go to a good university after three years’ hard work.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes
Yours
Lihua
【解析】试试题分析:考查应用文中的书信的写作。请你给自己的初中同学Jack写一封信,简要介绍自己的高中生活。要点都已经给出,审题时注意本文使用一般现在时,描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。
【亮点说明】
本文是一篇书信,格式正确,内容齐全,重点突出,语言简练,同时还使用高级句子。象范文的I will make good use of my time, because it is my dream to go to a good university after three years’ hard work.使用了because引导的原因状语从句和it做形式主语的句型,还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来,象Firstly. Secondly, Thirdly, At the same time等词,这样文章显得更连贯。