题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,最近收到澳大利亚朋友Sam的来信,现在你给他回信介绍学校基本情况以及你的高中生活,信的内容如下:
1.学校建于1915年,有教学班40个,教师170人,学生2100人。
2.主教学楼(the teaching building)能容纳(hold)60多个班;主教学楼有许多物理和化学实验室(physics and chemical labs),四个语音教室(sound labs) ;图书馆藏书20余万册。
3.你在高一(1)班就读。所学主要课程有:语文、数学、英语、物理(physics) 、化学(chemistry)、生物(biology)。
4.擅长(be good at)英语和数学;业余爱好:听流行音乐,打篮球和骑自行车(cycling)。
5.可适当增加细节,使内容连贯。信的开头已为你写好。
词数:100左右。
Dear Sam,
I was so pleased to hear from you and I am writing to ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sam,
I was so pleased to hear from you and I am writing to tell you something about my school and school life .
Our school was built in 1915. There are 40 classes with 2100 students and 170 teachers in it. When entering the school gate, you can see the main teaching building. There are many physics and chemical laboratories in it. There are also four sound labs in it. It can hold sixty classes. There are over 200, 000 books in the library. I’m studying in Class1, Grade 1. The main subjects include Chinese, maths, English physics, chemistry and computer. I like English and computer best and I am very good at them. In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music, playing basketball and cycling. I hope you come and visit some day.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本文为提纲类作文。首先,学生要仔细阅读提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。其次,要注意提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后,要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信,按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构,三段式,其中第二部分是本文的主体,既要介绍学校的总体情况,又要介绍自己的基本情况,可以分成两段,也可以一段,但是要注意用连接词来衔接。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。时间状语从句的使用:When entering the school gate, you can see the main teaching building. There be句型的大量使用:There are many physics and chemical laboratories in it.;There are also four sound labs in it;……