Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试都会出现以下焦虑症状，请你用英语写一封信，向某英语报编辑反映该问题，并提出几点建议，信的内容应包括下列要点：

焦虑症状建议：

1. 考前制定好合适的复习计划

2. 考试期间正常休息

3. 睡前洗热水澡，喝牛奶等有助于睡眠

4. 其他建议（内容可由考生自己拟定）

注意:1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇,使用一定的句型、词汇清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思

3. 词数100个左右。开头已给出不计词数。

Dear editor,

I’m Li Hua of Senior Two, Guang ming Middle School. I’m writing to tell you about some

symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about

some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams. Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam and we are all eager to get rid of them.

First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a right attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam.

Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.

We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.

【解析】试题为应用文中的书信写作，试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为半开放性写作。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是提出的建议， 三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。

【范文亮点】

First of all,　it’s important for　us to have a right attitude towards exams.这句话中有it做形式主语的句型，还用了词组First of all。They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results.这句话用了宾语从句。这篇文章还用了Besides，Therefore,这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。