题目内容
12.假定你是李华,想申请加入你校留学生俱乐部,以帮助外国学生学习汉语并了解中国文化.请给俱乐部负责人Mr.Blake 写一封邮件.内容包括:1.目的;
2.个人情况.
注意:
1.词数100左右,邮件开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Mr.Blake,
I'm Li Hua,a girl student in Grade Two.I'm writing to apply to join the Foreign Students Club to help the foreign students learn Chinese well and get a good understanding of Chinese culture.(高分句型一)
I'm sure I can be a qualified member.Firstly,I'm easy-going and love to make friends throughout the world.Secondly,my family has so far hosted five foreign students,so I'm experienced in communicating with foreigners.Besides,I can speak English fluently as well as having a rich knowledge of Chinese culture.(高分句型二)I do hope you can accept my application and I promise to do all I can to help them.(高分句型三)
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假定你是李华,想申请加入你校留学生俱乐部,以帮助外国学生学习汉语并了解中国文化.请给俱乐部负责人Mr.Blake 写一封邮件,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:目的;个人情况.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:apply to申请去做;get a good understanding of 很好的了解;Firstly首先;Secondly其次;Besides另外;Look forward to 盼望;as well as 和,也
I'm writing to apply to join the Foreign Students Club to help the foreign students learn Chinese well and get a good understanding of Chinese culture.(高分句型一)
Besides,I can speak English fluently as well as having a rich knowledge of Chinese culture.(高分句型二)
I do hope you can accept my application and I promise to do all I can to help them.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Mr.Blake,
I'm Li Hua,a girl student in Grade Two.I'm writing to apply to join the Foreign Students Club to help the foreign students learn Chinese well and get a good understanding of Chinese culture.(高分句型一)
I'm sure I can be a qualified member.Firstly,I'm easy-going and love to make friends throughout the world.Secondly,my family has so far hosted five foreign students,so I'm experienced in communicating with foreigners.Besides,I can speak English fluently as well as having a rich knowledge of Chinese culture.(高分句型二)I do hope you can accept my application and I promise to do all I can to help them.(高分句型三)
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.