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4．随着经济的发展，越来越多的文化遗产（cultural relics）遭到破坏．假设你是红星中学高中生李华，请给当地报社写一封信，就以下两个方面谈谈你的看法，以纪念6月10日的"世界文化遗产日（the World Cultural Heritage Day）"．
要点：1．文化遗迹的重要性（见证历史和文化，帮助人们了解过去；稀少，有价值）
          2．呼吁人们保护文化遗产
注意：1．要涵盖所给要点，词数100左右；
          2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
          3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Editor，
I am Li Hua，a senior student from Hong Xing High School．
Nowadays，with the development of our society，more and more cultural relics are facing the danger of disappearing．（高分句型一）So we must attach importance to the problem and try our best to protect them．
First，cultural relics represent our historic cultures，which offer us a great opportunity to learn about what happened in the past．（高分句型二）Also，they are the roots of a city or a place．They can help us make our traditional cultures handed down from generation to generation．More importantly，most of them have survived for a long time and they are usually very rare and valuable．
For above reasons，with the World Cultural Heritage Daycoming，we shouldn't hesitate to call on people to take action to save our treasures．（高分句型三）Ihope more and more people will become concerned about protecting our cultural relics．


Sincerely
Li Hua
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Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息随着经济的发展，越来越多的文化遗产（cultural relics）遭到破坏．假设你是红星中学高中生李华，请给当地报社写一封信，就以下两个方面谈谈你的看法，以纪念6月10日的"世界文化遗产日（the World Cultural Heritage Day）"．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：文化遗迹的重要性（见证历史和文化，帮助人们了解过去；稀少，有价值）；呼吁人们保护文化遗产2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：with the development of our society随着社会的发展；attach importance to认为…重要；from generation to generation一代又一代；More importantly更重要的是；call on 呼吁；
Nowadays，with the development of our society，more and more cultural relics are facing the danger of disappearing．（高分句型一）
First，cultural relics represent our historic cultures，which offer us a great opportunity to learn about what happened in the past．（高分句型二）
For above reasons，with the World Cultural Heritage Day coming，we shouldn't hesitate to call on people to take action to save our treasures．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Editor，
      I am Li Hua，a Senior student from Hong Xing High School．Nowadays，with the development of our society，more and more cultural relics are facing the danger of disappearing．（高分句型一）So we must attach importance to the problem and try our best to protect them．
      First，cultural relics represent our historic cultures，which offer us a great opportunity to learn about what happened in the past．（高分句型二）Also，they are the roots of a city or a place．They can help us make our traditional cultures handed down from generation to generation．More importantly，most of them have survived for a long time and they are usually very rare and valuable．
      For above reasons，with the World Cultural Heritage Day coming，we shouldn't hesitate to call on people to take action to save our treasures．（高分句型三）I hope more and more people will become concerned about protecting our cultural relics．
 
                                                                      
 Sincerely
                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．