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13.假如你是新华中学高二学生李华,你所在的城市将于7月18日-7月20日举办首届国际单车马拉松比赛(marathon).目前,市旅游局正面向社会招募100名自愿者,请写信给相关负责人申请该工作.
要点包括:
1.基本情况;
2.申请原因;
3.如何确保出色完成任务?
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯.
Dear Sirs,
I am a student who is senior two in Xinhua High School.I am writing to apply for the opportunity of being avolunteerin our city's First International Bicycle Marathon from July 18th to July 20th.(表明自己的基本情况并提出申请)
Firstly,I am in favor of the idea that students take a very important role in the society.【高分句型一】Then,as for me,I'm out going and willing to get along well with others.What's more,I am always helpful and warmhearted in my classmates'eyes.And in my parents'opinion,I am independent,that is,Ihave the ability to deal with some certain problems.Finally,I am particularly good at spoken English and have a deep understanding of the cultures of our city and our country,which will greatly help me do the job.【高分句型二】(申请原因以及自己具有能出色完成任务的特长)
I would be very grateful if you give the opportunity.I'm looking forward to your early reply(希望得到这个机会).
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

分析 这是一封申请信.根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态.内容包括:一表明自己的基本情况并提出申请;二申请原因以及自己具有能出色完成任务的特长;三希望得到这个机会.
高分句型:
1.Firstly,I am in favor of the idea that students take a very important role in the society.句子里 in favor of 表示"支持,赞同";that引导the idea 的同位语从句,介绍the idea 的内容;take a very important role in 表示"承担重要的角色".
首先,我赞同这个观点,即学生要在社会里承担重要的角色.
2.Finally,I am particularly good at spoken English and have a deep understanding of the cultures of our city and our country,which will greatly help me do the job.句子里be good at 表示"擅长";have a deep understanding of 表示"深刻理解";which引导非限制性定语从句,代指主句.
最后,我尤其擅长英语口语,对我国和我市的文化有深刻理解,这些都会极大地帮助我做好这个工作.

解答 Dear Sirs,
    I am a student who is senior two in Xinhua High School.I am writing to apply for the opportunity of being a volunteer in our city's First International Bicycle Marathon from July 18th to July 20th.(表明自己的基本情况并提出申请)
      Firstly,I am in favor of the idea that students take a very important role in the society.【高分句型一】Then,as for me,I'm outgoing and willing to get along well withothers.What's more,I am always helpful and warmhearted in my classmates'eyes.And in my parents'opinion,I am independent,that is,I have the ability to deal with some certain problems.Finally,I am particularly good at spoken English and have a deep understanding of the cultures of our city and our country,which will greatly help me do the job.【高分句型二】(申请原因以及自己具有能出色完成任务的特长)
       I would be very grateful if you give the opportunity.I'm looking forward to your early reply(希望得到这个机会). Yours sincerely
                                                              Li Hua

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          2.呼吁人们保护文化遗产
注意:1.要涵盖所给要点,词数100左右;
          2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
          3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数.
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I am Li Hua,a senior student from Hong Xing High School.
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Sincerely
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