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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the development of modem technology, there are plenty ways for us to contact people. One of our most favorite ways is probably WeChat. The main reason may be because it is very convenient to use with the popularity of the smart phone. We can contact friends whenever it is but wherever we are. We like using WeChat also because it is very cheap. It costs only a little and is even free unless Wi-Fi is available. Another advantage lies in the speed with which messages get sent and received. It's so fast that we can get in touch with others instantly. More importantly, using WeChat, we can give friends not only very exact written informations but also very moving greeting words, that we might not say face to face. Besides, music as well as pictures and videos are often uploaded through WeChat, so it is now a useful entertainment tool.
In a word, using WeChat is a good choice for you to keep in contact with friends.
【答案】①在plenty后加of ②删除favorite前的most ③because改为that ④but改为and ⑤unless改为if/when ⑥with改为at ⑦informations改为information ⑧that改which ⑨are改为is ⑩you改为us
【解析】本文是一篇说明文,介绍了微信给人们带来了便捷。(!)固定短语误用,在plenty后加of。plenty of“ 大量的,许多的”。(2)形容词用法错误。删除favorite前的most。favorite “最喜欢的”,没有最高级。(3)连词误用。because改为that。Theeason is/was ...that …表示“…的原因是…”,为固定句型,表语从句要用that引出。(4)并列词误用,but改为and。whenever和wherever引导的让步状语从句是并列关系,应用and连接。(5)连词误用。unless改为if/when。句意:如果在有wifi的时候,它甚至是免费的。所以将unless改为if/when 。(6)介词误用。with改为at。此处介词加关系代词引导定语从句。which代指先行词speed引导定语从句。at the speed固定搭配“以…的速度”。(7)名词误用。informations改为information。information为不可数名词。(8)关系代词误用。这是一个非限定性定语从句,不能用that引导,先行词在从句中作宾语,故将that改为which。(9)主谓不一致。are改为is。此句的主语为music,为不可数名词,故谓语用单数形式(10)代词误用。you改为us。根据本句逻辑关系,总之,使用微信是一个很好的选择,我们可以和朋友保持联系,故将you改为us。