题目内容
19.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在齐下面写出修改后的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
Dear Li Xiaojun,
I'm glad to receive your letter.I'd like to discuss the problem to you.It is true that some video games is good for your thinking ability and they can sometimes make you felt relaxed.Therefore,you are spending too much time on that.You are not little boy any more.You should learn to control yourself.Why not to try to finish your homework first every day and then spend a little time play some video games.I think,like a student,the most important thing is to study hard at school.You should try your best to get good grade in your subjects and try to become a useful person for the future.
Yours,
Editor.
分析 本文主要讲述一些视频游戏虽然对锻炼思维能力有益,也能使人放松,但花过多的时间玩游戏则影响了学习.作者认为学生应努力学习,将来能成为一个有用的人.
解答 Dear Li Xiaojun,
I'm glad to receive your letter.I'd like to discuss the problem to you.It is true that some video games is good for your thinking ability and they can sometimes make you felt relaxed.Therefore,you are spending too much time on that.You are not∧little boy any more.You should learn to control yourself.Why not to try to finish your homework first every day and then spend a little time play some video games.I think,like a student,the most important thing is to study hard at school.You should try your best to get good grade in your subjects and try to become a useful person for the future.
Yours,
Editor.
详解:
1.to改为with 考查介词.discuss with意为"与…讨论(某题目)",是固定搭配.
2.is改为are 考查主谓一致.主语some video games是复数,谓语动词也应用复数are.
3.felt改为feel 考查动词不定式.make是使役动词,后接动词时用不带to的动词不定式作宾语补足语.
4.Therefore改为However 考查副词.however表示转折,尤其用于谈及一个既成事实时,表示转折,其意为"可是""仍然"等.可放在句首、句中或句末,通常用逗号与句子其他成分隔开.
5.加a 考查冠词.boy是可数名词,单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指.
6.去掉to 考查固定搭配.why not 意思是"为什么不呢?''一般用在疑问句中,表示提建议.why not 后面要接动词原型.
7.play改为playing 考查动名词.spend time in doing sth.意为"花费时间做某事",in后接动词-ing形式,in也可以省略
8.like改为as 考查介词.like意为"像,相似",as意为"作为",此处应是:作为.
9.grade改为grades 考查名词复数.grade是可数名词,基本意思是"等级",可用于产品质量、官阶、学位、技巧水平等,因后接定语in your subjects,表示不止一个科目中的等级,要用复数形式.
10.for改为in 考查固定搭配.in the future意为"今后,将来",是固定搭配.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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41.A.broke out | B.took place | C.occurred to | D.broke down |
42.A.spring | B.summer | C.autumn | D.winter |
43.A.beach | B.jungle | C.hotel | D.village |
44.A.regular | B.ordinary | C.unusual | D.normal |
45.A.seconds | B.days | C.minutes | D.weeks |
46.A.that | B.when | C.where | D.what |
47.A.for | B.from | C.to | D.in |
48.A.announced | B.ignored | C.realized | D.remembered |
49.A.jungle | B.desert | C.village | D.river |
50.A.hardly | B.quite | C.ever | D.never |
51.A.benefit | B.question | C.state | D.trouble |
52.A.confident | B.afraid | C.intelligent | D.brave |
53.A.shout | B.pray | C.scream | D.yawn |
54.A.forgot | B.understood | C.explained | D.ignored |
55.A.telling | B.warning | C.blaming | D.apologizing |
56.A.walked | B.jumped | C.crossed | D.flew |
57.A.dangerous | B.same | C.different | D.grand |
58.A.accidently | B.disappointedly | C.freely | D.safely |
59.A.small | B.funny | C.elegant | D.possible |
60.A.outstanding | B.easygoing | C.beautiful | D.kind |