题目内容
【题目】请你根据提示写一封信。
假如你叫李华,是涑北中学的一名高一学生,你的外教Johnson先生把美国学生Rose介绍给你做笔友,现在请你给她写一封信,在信中你表示希望和她做笔友,简单介绍一下你自己,如你的爱好等,并希望了解美国学生的生活等。
Dear Rose,
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Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Rose,
I'm happy to write to you for the first time. You were introduced to me by Mr. Johnson, my foreign teacher, because I wanted to have a pen pal in your country. I hope we will be good friends.
My name is Li Hua, a student of Senior 1 of Subei Middle School. I will be seventeen years old. I like sports very much, especially volleyball and tennis. Do you like volleyball and tennis? I am very interested in American life and would like to know how American students live at home and their interest.
I am looking forward to your letter.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是一篇书信类作文,主要是写一封信,在信中你表示希望和Rose做笔友,简单介绍一下你自己,如你的爱好等,并希望了解美国学生的生活等。还可以适当增加自己的观点,从而是文章更加流畅,具有可读性。
亮点:文章以第一人称为主,开门见山的写出自己的目的,对自己进行了简单的介绍。用了疑问句复合句等句型。用了以一般现在时为主还有一般将来时的格式。文章简单,流畅,没有过多的错误。朴实、没有过多的修饰,是一篇不错的书信作文。