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16．假定你是李华，你从互联网上得知英国曼彻斯特市"2018中国文化年"组委会在中国招募志愿者，请你写一封申请信参加，要点包括：
1．自身情况（英语能力等）；
2．工作能力（对中国文化非常了解等）；
3．希望获准．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．信的开头和结尾已给出，不算入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a senior high school student in China．Learning from the Internet that you are recruiting some volunteers in China，I'm writing to apply to join you．（高分句型一）
I believe I am qualified and suitable to be one of the volunteers．To begin with，having learned English for more than 10 years，I can speak English fluently，having no trouble expressing myself．（高分句型二）I once worked as a volunteer in similar activities held in Beijing，so I have relevant working experience．In addition，I'm outgoing and always ready to help others．Most importantly，I have a good understanding of Chinese culture，which enables me to introduce not only Chinese calligraphy，Chinese painting and Chinese musical instruments but also Chinese folk art like paper cutting and local operas，and typical Chinese diets．（高分句型三）
In brief，I am sure I can meet your requirements．I would appreciate it if you take my application into consideration．
I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，你从互联网上得知英国曼彻斯特市"2018中国文化年"组委会在中国招募志愿者，请你写一封申请信参加，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：自身情况（英语能力等）；工作能力（对中国文化非常了解等）；希望获准．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：apply to 申请做某事；To begin with首先；more than超过；Most importantly更重要的是；In brief简而言之；take my application into consideration考虑我的申请书；In addition另外；
Learning from the Internet that you are recruiting some volunteers in China，I'm writing to apply to join you．（高分句型一）
To begin with，having learned English for more than 10 years，I can speak English fluently，having no trouble expressing myself．（高分句型二）
Most importantly，I have a good understanding of Chinese culture，which enables me to introduce not only Chinese calligraphy，Chinese painting and Chinese musical instruments but also Chinese folk art like paper cutting and local operas，and typical Chinese diets．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
       I'm Li Hua，a senior high school student in China．Learning from the Internet that you are recruiting some volunteers in China，I'm writing to apply to join you．（高分句型一）
       I believe I am qualified and suitable to be one of the volunteers．To begin with，having learned English for more than 10 years，I can speak English fluently，having no trouble expressing myself．（高分句型二）I once worked as a volunteer in similar activities held in Beijing，so I have relevant working experience．In addition，I'm outgoing and always ready to help others．Most importantly，I have a good understanding of Chinese culture，which enables me to introduce not only Chinese calligraphy，Chinese painting and Chinese musical instruments but also Chinese folk art like paper cutting and local operas，and typical Chinese diets．（高分句型三）
       In brief，I am sure I can meet your requirements．I would appreciate it if you take my application into consideration．
       I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．