题目内容
【题目】学校英语社团即将举办一年一度的中国诗词翻译大赛。假定你是社团主席李华,请你写一个活动通知,内容包括:
1. 介绍比赛安排;
2. 参加比赛的好处;
3. 欢迎所有学生参加。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Date: June 21,2020
Notice
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The English Club
【答案】Date:June 21,2020
Notice
The annual translation competition on Chinese poetry is going to be held online from June 28 to 30 by our school’s English Club. Any student who would like to participate needs to email the translation to tranlslation-2020@yahoo.com, and attach a no-longer-than-3-minute video of performing the translation in a specially designed scene related to the poem. Then based on ten professional judges’ decision,there will be a first-prize winner, two second-prize and five third-prize. The awards are more than wonderful and appealing,such as Kindles and gift cards of Xinhua Bookstore.
All of you, including the overseas students, are welcome to join in the activity. Not only can the experience help you to gain a deeper understanding of Chinese culture and history, but it also gives you an opportunity to show how well you master both Chinese and English. So what are you waiting for? Just begin your translation.
The English Club
【解析】
本篇作文属于应用文,要求对学校即将举办的中国诗词翻译大赛写一个活动通知。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
写作要求:1. 介绍比赛安排;
2. 参加比赛的好处;
3. 欢迎所有学生参加。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
participate;be based on;be welcome to; not only…but also…
第三步:连词成句
Any student who would like to participate needs to email the translation to tranlslation-2020@yahoo.com.
Then based on ten professional judges’ decision, there will be a first-prize winner,two second-prize and five third-prize.
All of you, including the overseas students, are welcome to join in the activity.
Not only can the experience help you to gain a deeper understanding of Chinese culture and history,but it also gives you an opportunity to show how well you master both Chinese and English.
在进行造句的时候一定要注意时态和语态上面的问题.
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1. 文章的结构顺序:介绍比赛安排;参加比赛的好处;对大家发出邀请。
2.表并列补充关系:then; not only…but also…; such as
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰
第五步:修改润色