Question

【题目】假如你是高三(1)班班长李华。随着高考的临近，你班一些同学开始紧张焦虑。请你在班级微信群给大家留言，鼓励大家轻松迎考。留言应包括下列要点:

1.症状及影响； 2.合理建议； 3.高考祝愿。

注意: 1.短文应包括全部要点。2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。3.短文中不可出现考生真实信息。4.词数: 100左右开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear classmates,

With the entrance examination for college drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently.

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Best wishes，

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear classmates,

With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently. Some suffer from lack of sleep, and others lose their appetite, which has a terrible effect on their study. Therefore, they are all eager to get rid of them.

My suggestions are as follows.First of all, it’s important for us to have a good attitude towards the examination. If you treat the College Entrance Examination as one of your normal examinations , there is no need to worry too much about it. Besides, in order to concentrate more on our classes , we’d better keep a proper timetable to make sure that we have abundant sleep . Only in this way will we keep energetic. Last but not least ,it is advised that you participate in a variety of after-school activities to relax yourself.

I do hope that all of us keep confident about the exam. Thus we will achieve great academic performance in the exam. Wish all of you could be admitted to your ideal universities!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一份留言。

第一步：

审题：留言 关于同学的焦虑情绪提出建议

人称：第一、二人称

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明同学中焦虑的症状和影响，第二部分提出合理建议，第三部分表达对同学的祝愿

要点：

1. 说明同学中焦虑的症状和影响：失眠、没有食欲，对学习影响不好

2．提出合理的建议

①对高考有正确的态度：将高考当成平常的考试

②保持合理的时间安排，保证睡眠充足

③ 参加课后活动，放松自己

3．表达对同学的祝愿 ：高考中取得好成绩，被理想的大学录取

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）

the College Entrance Examination；draw near；feel nervous；suffer from；lose appetite；have an effect on；be eager to；attitude towards…；treat…as；concentrate on；have abundant sleep；keep energetic；participate in；relax oneself；be confident about；achieve great academic performance；be admitted to

第三步：连词成句

(1)With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently.

(2)Some suffer from lack of sleep, and others lose their appetite.

(3) This has a terrible effect on their study.

(4) They are all eager to get rid of them.

(5) It’s important for us to have a good attitude towards the examination.

(6) You treat the College Entrance Examination as one of your normal examinations.

(7) There is no need to worry too much about it.

(8) We’d better keep a proper timetable to make sure that we have abundant sleep .

(9) We will keep energetic.

(10) You participate in a variety of after-school activities to relax yourself.

(12) All of us keep confident about the exam.

(13) We will achieve great academic performance in the exam.

(14) Wish all of you could be admitted to your ideal universities .

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)

表示时间顺序： first of all; to begin/start with , in the beginning

firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end

表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others

表示转折对比关系：but, however, although, though, yet, while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果关系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, consequently, thus

连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、

段与段之间结构清晰。