Question

【题目】文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面处写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。

One night, I called my 27-year-old son, he was on his way to a company. He says he would call me back shortly. Strange he did not. This was pretty unusual. The following morning, I called but got no respond, which worried me. Later, he texted me from his iPad, tells me he lost his phone right after my first call. He was very upset because of it held many memorable photo and texts. He said that a co-worker called phone, and a cabdriver answered. The driver said he would gladly return the phone or gave his cell number to the co-worker. What lucky my son was!

Answer 1

【答案】he改成who

says 改成said

Strange 改成Strangely

respond 改成response

tells 改成telling

of去掉

photo 改成photos

加上the

or 改成and

What 改成How

【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述作者儿子手机丢了并再次找回的故事。

第一处：定语从句用法错误。句中先行词为son，在非限定性定语从句中作主语，故用关系代词who。句意：一天晚上，我打电话给我27岁的儿子，他正在去一家公司的路上。故将he改为who。

第二处：时态用法错误。根据前后句时态可知，用一般过去时。句意：他说他会很快给我回电话。故将says 改成said。

第三处：词性用法错误。副词修饰全句。句意：奇怪的是，他没有。故将Strange 改成Strangely。

第四处：词性用法错误。形容词no后接名词形式。句意：我打电话，但没有回应。故将respond 改成response。

第五处：非谓语动词用法错误。分析句子可知，句子缺少连词，故用非谓语动词。句中逻辑主语为he，与tell之间为主动关系，故用现在分词。句意：他从iPad上发短信给我，告诉我他刚丢了电话。故将tells 改成telling。

第六处：词法用法错误。因为后接it held many memorable photo and texts.为句子，故用连词because。句意：他非常沮丧，因为它保存了许多值得纪念的照片和消息。故将of去掉。

第七处：名词数用法错误。名词photo为可数名词，根据前面的many修饰可知用复数形式。句意：因为它保存了许多值得纪念的照片和信息。故将photo 改成photos。

第八处：冠词用法错误。这里的名词phone是特指，故用定冠词the。句意：他说一个同事打这部手机。故在phone前加上the。

第九处：连词用法错误。根据前后句之间的关系可知，这里为并列关系。句意：司机说他会很乐意归还手机，并把他的手机号码给他。故将or 改成and。

第十处：感叹句用法错误。How + adj. + 主语 + 谓语！句意：我儿子是多么的幸运啊！故将What 改成How。