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假定你是高中生李华，对西方文化非常感兴趣，想在暑期去英国旅游。请你给你的英国网友戴维（David）发一封电子邮件。内容包括：1. 旅游目的；2. 旅游计划；3. 需要的帮助。注意：1.词数100左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Dear David,

I have been expecting to travel to the UK so that I can experience English culture personally. I am writing to ask for some advice.

My parents and I plan to travel to the UK during the summer holidays. We are to spend a week in London. Since this is the first time that I have traveled abroad, I would like to know which places of interest are well worth visiting. Can you offer me some advice and recommend some tourist attractions to me?

I would appreciate it if you could write back to me soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：

这是一篇材料类作文，假定是高中生李华，对西方文化非常感兴趣，想在暑期去英国旅游。给英国网友戴维（David）发一封电子邮件。内容包括：旅游目的；旅游计划；需要的帮助。词数100左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

文中第一段直接点题说明要点，并在最后加以说明发电子邮件的目的。第二段包含了三个要点内容，并在最后用问句形式点明“迫切需要帮助”紧扣主题。并在第三段适当发挥，表示感谢。整篇文章从语法来看，没犯语法错误；从内容上看简洁明了，符合英文电子邮件的特点，让人读起朗朗上口，是一篇很值得借鉴的文章。

亮点说明：

范文使用了一些重要的语法知识：结果状语从句so that I can experience English culture personally；宾语从句 which places of interest are well worth visiting；固定句型This is the …time that sb. have/has done sth.

范文注意使用了现在完成进行时、一般现在时、一般将来时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情，对时态有较好的把握。

范文运用一些亮点词汇词组如be well worth visiting、tourist attraction、appreciate等使作文内容更加充实，表达更加生动。

考点：材料类作文

 

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