Question

【题目】短文改错

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Yesterday I was gone home by the bus and my father was going to pick me up at the station. On the bus, I see a young woman with several bags of heavier books get on. I wanted to offer her my seat, and I didn’t. In my surprise, she and I got off at the same stations later. After a short conversation, I learned she had to walk a long way home. So I offered give her a ride and she accepted. When thinking of this experience, I was sad that she didn’t do the right thing the first time on the bus. But I was very happy to have a second chance to doing it.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】I was gone home------I was going home

【2】by the bus------by bus

【3】I see a young woman-----I saw a young woman

【4】bags of heavier books------ bags of heavy books

【5】and I didn’t----but I didn’t

【6】in my surprise-------to my surprise

【7】at the same stations-------at the same station

【8】I offered ^give----to

【9】she didn’t do the right thing-----I didn’t do the right thing

【10】a second chance to doing -----a second chance to do

【解析】

试题分析：本文章讲述的是作者帮助小女孩的故事。

【1】I was gone home------I was going home 考查固定用法：be going to表示计划、打算。根据后文my father was going to pick me up at the station也可看出错误之处，故I was gone home------I was going home。

【2】by the bus------by bus 考查定冠词用法，by bus 无定冠词，故by the bus------by bus 。

【3】I see a young woman-----I saw a young woman 考查时态。根据前文可知是昨天在公交车上，故I see a young woman-----I saw a young woman 。

【4】bags of heavier books------ bags of heavy books 考查形容词。句意：我看见一个年轻的女孩背着几个沉重的书包。故bags of heavier books------ bags of heavy books 。

【5】and I didn’t----but I didn’t 考查逻辑关系。句意：我想把我的座位让给她，但是我不能。这两句为转折关系，故and I didn’t----but I didn’t 。

【6】in my surprise-------to my surprise 考查固定用法。To one’s surprise 令人惊讶的是; 令某人惊讶的是，故in my surprise-------to my surprise 。

【7】at the same stations-------at the same station 考查单词单复数。 由文章可知，这个车站是一个车站，故用单数形式。所以at the same stations-------at the same station。

【8】I offered ^give----to 考查固定用法。Offer to do 主动提出做某事; 主动提出做; 主动做某事，故I offered ^give----to。

【9】she didn’t do the right thing-----I didn’t do the right thing 考查对文章的理解。由文章可知，作者第一次没有给小女孩让座，是作者做错了，故she didn’t do the right thing-----I didn’t do the right thing 。

【10】a second chance to doing -----a second chance to do考查固定用法。a second chance to do 有第二个机会做某事。故a second chance to doing -----a second chance to do。